slightly OOC but still really cool

You once said that your early work was not nearly as good, and this is obviously quite old. However, even then you had an excellent grasp on Vegeta's character. And ho-ly crap, your writing was flawless. I am impressed.

I've usually just assumed that Vegeta left because he didn't really care all that much about his new family, but I like the idea of this. I think you did a wonderful job keeping things realistic. I mean, he's still stubborn and oh so burdened. I think it is possible that he left because of these reasons, and that he was still too proud at this point to tell Bulma of his decision.

I can't believe I haven't read any of your oneshots or older work sooner, but I'll definitely be taking a look around.)

nice story

Oh, this was so sad, but so very lovely too. Now she's going to think that he doesn't want a future with her, when it's actually the opposite. A little weird having Vegeta admitting (even to himself) that he loves her, but still it was so beautiful. I'll be reading more of your fics

*Breaks down into a sobbing mess* V-Vegeta-chan! *Sniff* You're...you're just so...so lovable! I always wondered if there was a deeper meaning to why Vegeta left. I wonder if this is it...curse Akira for cutting out those three years! D:

oh that was beautiful. i loved it

*sniffs and wipes nose
oh, poor vegeta. hes been through so much and he really does try so hard.

great fic. it was really deep, and i loved it.

::sobs tell her more than that you idiot!:breaks down completely very VERY well written. you are the tear-jerker master!

I really liked it. I almost started to cry. Great job and keep up the work. Can't wait to read more of your .

That is...so...terribly...sad!

Wonderful though!

Ok, I swore not to do this, but... AW! I'm running out of words here. I've been reviewing your work for so long that I no longer have any superlatives meaning 'Good' I haven't used! So 'Aww' will have to do, for now. Maybe I'll come back and leave a sensible review later on.

Keep writin'!

This was really well written. So many stories have him being so cold and uncaring...but it doesn't take much of a stretch to imagine that there might be a whole other explaination for the things he does. Certainly his pride prevents him from being overly affectionate, but it doesn't mean his heart is dead to the world. Anyway, it was really good and i thought you should know that your depiction of him was well done.

This is so good yet so sad! Your writing is amazing!This is now my new theory on why Vegeta left Bulma...

it is sad. it's just frustrating that he doesn't realize that it would probably be easier for him and her if he just told her thr truth.

WA! *blubs like a baby
Turn around! Go back to her!*shakes Vegeta
Blast you and your damn pride!)