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aol -god- send
2009-12-05 . chapter 14
naruto and recca like sasuke too much, they screwed with him innecesantly in hokage no isan
gemini6
2009-12-05 . chapter 14
naruto wouldn't have "exploded from rage or mortification" as you put it, in hocage no isan. you've screwed up on this, Recca and naruto so far aren't anywhere NEAR as cool and badass as they should be. only domon is, with his ** unbelieveable strength against deidara, though he could have just punched his face in. seriously, fix your ** mistakes, you're ruining a fic I literally shouted for joy when I first saw, having read hokage no isan.
jacklovessports
2009-12-05 . chapter 14
you say that "our heroes" have matured but they haven't. you say they've come to kick some **, but they haven't. they were way more mature 3 years ago. seriously, I don't mind if you make some divergences from the canon plot, but make the three main characters the way they should be
alphabetagemini400
2009-12-05 . chapter 14
i hate to say it, but I'm losing interest. you're not making naruot, recca, and domon as cool, funny, and seriously badass as they should be. if they don't start acting at least like they did in "hokage no isan", i'm gonna stop reading. sorry, but you don't change characters this much without giving a reason, a GOOD reason
Freehawk
2009-12-05 . chapter 14
narito, recca, and domon call themselves the pranksters of konoha for a reason, and they should be able to handle Sai a lot better then how they are now. Right now, you're making them too much like canon naruto: overactive, not as intelligent as in "hokage no isan", and not as strong as they should be, they should be High-a to s rank by now.
redhrard
2009-12-05 . chapter 14
good story, but this is ridiculous! recca and naruto are smarter, not to mention cooler, then that! Like when they first meet the sand siblings, they were badass. change it please, make them like they were before, cool badass, intelligent, powerful (even more so now) and funny as hell.
aol -god- send
2009-12-05 . chapter 14
great story, but I know that Naruto and recca are cooler, more badass, and smarter, and have better control over their anger, then you're making them out to be. work on that
marc
2009-12-05 . chapter 14
seriously, after seeing how strong Domon, naruto, and recca were three years ago, now, they should be mid-a to low s rak. you're really down playing them. and naruto has better control over his temper than that when it comes to life and death situations, look how he handled orochimaru and gaara
DBZLOVER
2009-12-05 . chapter 14
this is a good story, but COME ON! Naruto and Reca are smarter than that, and a lot more badass. remember how naruto took out sasuke by using his sharingan against him in the chuunin exams? And how recca guided them as leader with strategies? seriously, you're making this fic worse than it could be, I mean, the first story was great, and it didn't take any major divergences. please make the prankster trio as badass and cool and smart as they have to be after three years. oh, and keep up the good work
storyreaderlovespie
2009-12-05 . chapter 14
great story, PLEASE make Naruto and recca (and Domon) act like the weird, but smart people from "Hokage no Isan" in other words, funnier, cooler, and not stupider
jack
2009-12-05 . chapter 14
great story, but STOP MAKING NARUTO AND RECCA LOOK SO DUMB! They're way smarter then the way they've been acting, and since Kyuubi is naruto's dad, why is Naruto going crazy with Dad's chakra? Again, stop making them act so different from how they were in the prequel to this story
alphabetagemini400
2009-12-05 . chapter 14
how come you're letting Recca and naruto act so childish, they're smarter then that, and they're pranksters who are... blunt. they can handle sai!!
earthmover567
2009-12-05 . chapter 10
great chapter, but personally, I like seeing Naruto strong without his dad's (Kyuubi) help, keep it up.
alphabetagemini400
2009-12-05 . chapter 10
great story, but since Recca and naruto love to use pshychological warfare on opponents, maybe making fun of Deidara being a tranvestite would work!
DBZLOVER
2009-12-05 . chapter 9
great chapter, great fight scenes
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