Very deep. I like it.

.:calee:.

Quit changing your writing style every other month! Just kidding. :)

I liked this, and we all know how much I hate Orihime usually.

A very nice take on Orihime :) I liked the words in parentheses and the impact it all had on me.

A masterpiece.

-Kath

There a few punctuation errors, but the idea and execution is very nice. Good work.

HEyy! amazingly written! i love it!