Your story is very interesting. I enjoyed reading it. I'm glad I can put a ending to megamix panda, lol. I understand what you mean by how you like your ending, but at the same time don't. Though a ture artist is never satisfied with their work. I wish you luck on all your futer fanfics!

-J9

I really enjoyed this and I'm gload someone continued after this particular MegaMix. Will you write a sequal or follow-up?

This was really good Diane, and I'm sorry I haven't been able to read this earlier! Megamix Panda is my favourite one because it's got a complex background.

I bow my hat to Shuichi for acting so "mature" about all this mess. No matter how hurt he must feel, he loves Eiri so much that he stands back enough to control his anger and to feel sorry for his lover(and even Tohma & Tatsuha). Very wise of him!

As far as Tohma's concerned... Well, you know how much I love him! I was so afraid you'd fall in the stereotype "Tohma = bad guy" (especially concerning this Megamix) and I was so relieved that you didn't give him the bad role. Sure, he's sick somehow, but he is in a way as tortured and even more desperate than Eiri (because contrary to Shuichi, Mika's apparently never been able to "rescue him"). That chapter was very well written and I indeed think he did that out of despair, hoping to "save" Eiri and be saved too. You stayed true to his character, so complex to write. I love the sly smiles which hide his anxiety, the way his plan didn't go as expected and how it leaves him both devastated and relieved, to a certain extent. He is so touching when his mask falls off! (gee, that makes me feel like continueing my "Until the mask falls off" fic! lol)

And Eiri... What can I say? If I had been Shuichi, I would have wanted to hate him for what he did (when I feel betrayed, I just can't control my anger and i'm unable to stop and give it a thought!!), but then, if I had seen him the way you describe him, looking so weak, so scared, so self-hatred, so in love, so...human... I would have just hold him tight!!

I'd be tempted to say "Write more" because I'd really like to see Eiri's reaction after such powerful and touching words but I think i'd rather keep that scene for my imagination. That was the perfect ending and I really don't think there's more to be said. But it's up to you! I know that whatever you decide, you'll come up with a fantastic story! :)

Hmm...I feel the same way as you...like there should be more but at the same time...it's good ending...(sigh). I swear that I'll finish the other thing and send it to you soon.

I agree...it could have had more, yet it ended right where it should...If you really wanted to add more, you could do an epilouge. I don't think it would hurt anything, but if you don't, the ending here is perfect...that one simple line says it all. This was a great fic!! can't wait to see what else that brilliantly devious mind comes up with!!

All I can say is wow! You did such an amazing job. The moment I started to read this I couldn't stop.
I'm still so very amazed at how good this is. I wish I could really tell you how good I thought this was but I just can't because I can't think of any words to describe how good I thought it was. ^^
Okay I'm going to stop babbling like an idiot. ^^;;

This scene with Tohma and Shuichi is amazing. I like the emotion of the situation and I like that Tohma isn't exactly sure what Shuichi is going to do. In the story Tohma seems so sure about everything but in the end I think it's just calculated guesses.

Holy CRAP! how do you manage to but so much gutwrenching, nerve-wracking tension into two small chapters?I haven't 'read' this mix yet, but I've seen bits and pieces of it...where did you read it? I've been hunting FOREVER to find a scanlation of the remix, megamix and EX...all I've been able to get my hands on are the first ch of EX and the 2nd chap of remix!! PLZ help a Gravi fangirl out?? lol...can't wait to see how this concludes!!

o.O I just read megamix panda my eyes may never be the same sadly D; I didn't know Yukia was in to incest o.o

Awsome! This is a wonderful beginning, and I hope to read more soon ^_^.

That's a perfect ending place for the first chapter! I don't think that's where I would have put it.

I really do like this story. I also feel that you still deserve my review.

wow, this is a new perspective on shuichi's pov about that last scene from megamix panda. I don't know what shu's up to, but the way he handled it here was quite mature; I applaud you for that. I could see a possible confrontation in the next chapter, but really, I'm curious about what shuichi will do, and if eiri will find out about it at all... please do write more ;)