Gahh! Omg. You're amazing. I love your writing. I'm reading that other story thing now!! :)

I love this... u absolutely have Seth's character down, I can totally picture him saying everything you write Here. Ryan's character is also very good. Ah, hell! All the characters are good!

Favorite Line:

“Yeah, good idea in theory but in reality…. Not so much. Turns out her dad got it for her on his honeymoon with the new Mrs. Roberts in Tahiti and it was one of a kind. Also extremely expensive.” <-- Seth's character completely comes out here!

Overall, great job. And gosh, this is only the first chapter? Yippee!

Your writing is great!
You keep the characters personality more than any other fan fiction i have seen! It's really great! Seth is so damn funny!

Great Chapter!! you should totally do another one when she actually has had the baby...

I love this story I read at leat 5 times already

lol love it very cute love seth in the cahpter hes hilarious :D

lol love it very cute love seth in the cahpter hes hilarious :D

that was god you should add another chapter

wowowowo...PLEASE CONTINUE

Luv this post!!

I love the idea of them moving into the model home. I don't think any fan fic has written about RM moving and living in the model home.

Post more!

i think you should write more oc stories maybe more r/m ones

Awesome! Please continue

ah the pretty button i love this button lol just joking, love the story though very cute, that is definitly how i imagine myself at my wedding whenever it comes, very nervous :D

post asap

aw thats so cute :D