Another story ends so another can rise. This was an interesting look at TDI blended with video game elements. I hope that the next story will rock as hard as the others.

AWESOME! Nice end to it. Good luck on your other stories!

LYAL!

Fleur-Isobel! :D

Wonderful Chapter, can't wait for the final chapter good luck to both Kenny and Bren

Awesome. That was wicked awesome! Ah I can't wait for the finals! I'll go check out yer fallout fic right now.

LYAL!

Fleur-Isobel!

Kinda left out a lot from the review. Alright. What I wanted to say was that I read chapter eleven like five times. It was that good. Umm I really liked the part when Isobel's scream could be heard and Kenny: Angry Isobel

Bren: Scarier than bees.

Hehe Nice. Very nice, I laughed for like five-ten minutes straight.

Okay well...

LYAL!

Fleur-Isobel! XD

No! She's gone. ooh well. At least she's with Hao now. hehe. Great chapter! Can't wait for more. XD:D

Fleur-Isobel! XD

Haha, nice! Good chapter! I really wanna see what happens when they take on Tenkage.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Fleur-Isobel! XD :D

Poor Hao! That had to be the best chapter yet, though. This was seriously amazing. I LOVE THIS STORY! XD
Oh man this is getting really good. I'm so hooked on this story!

LYAL!

Fleur-Isobel! :D

Hao doing shirtless push ups? hehehe wow. LOL That was an awesome chapter! I think all the fighting is the best part. Can't wait for another chapter! XD :D XD

LYAL!

Fleur-Isobel! XD

I never would have guessed that it was Tenkage... But wow. I wanna know what happens! Great chapter by the way. It was pretty amazing. I'm totally hooked on this story!

LYAL!

Fleur-Isobel! XD :D

Pretty cool chapter, liked how even though Chris told them theyd loose, they still fought Chris with every thing they had.

About becoming a real writer, I'd say go for it. Do what ever you feel is right.

AW poor Aries! Hm, since Bren missed when he tried to attack we didn't get to see the power of Muramasa. It makes me curious. I wanna know! Anyways, once again great chapter. I think you would be a good tv show writer. But I wanna read your other story. I think you're a good writer, though.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Fleur-Isobel! :D XD

I say go for it, become a writer. I'm sure the book will be great and no I don't know Japanese.

Wow. HAHA nice. That was awesome! XD

Great chappie and can't wait for more! Poor chase. This is really getting interesting.

Fleur-Isobel! :D

Another interesting spin on an old favorite. You gottal love the ultimate rick-roll. PPMS