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nice story!

i love jasper and alice, they are such a cute couple! you write them extremely well

olivia

What a great, sweet, adorable story.

There was a few missing words and spelling mistake, but who cares... Alice and Jasper ftw

Aw, sweet story!

White wedding is a song about an older brother coming home early and finding his little sister sleeping with a man.

it is about the shotgun wedding that follows.

Sweet. Jasper and Alice rule!

I liked this story :)

Very cute moments and I like the way you write!

Hum...honestly, it was hard to follow. I didn't really get the part about Alice's vision. I kept expecting it to come back into the plot. I was also expecting Jessica's part to be more throughout the entire thing. Besides that, it was nicely written. Keep working at it!