EHEHEHE S'about time he admitted his love. Bummer it had to be because Optimus's unknown state of being... he's alive... I just know it... .

Daawww they both care for each other! They just need to admit it to themselves! ROAR

oooooo o_O split spark! I fear that this might end up where each parent gets one twin to raise! Poor sparklings! ooooo cant wait to see what happens!

aaAAawwwe, and I thought Ironhide wouldn't have been the mean one about it, but I am glad that the twins were so understanding. I am also glad that Prowl is more sympathetic now! hehe Thanks for writing!

Uh oh! Noo Megatron! Nooo Opty-napping! What will Megatron's team think of him bringing Prime over? Hehe thanks for writing, I am interested to see how this all plays out.

UH OH! A sparkling between the two of them? I have a feeling Megs won't be a nice daddy. This was an interesting chapter! Thanks for writing it)

X3 cute!

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LOVE IT! STARLIGHT AND CRIMSOMLIGHT ARE SO ADORABLE!

I really enjoyed this story. I didn't entirely like what happened with Ironhide, but I must admit it was a unique and imaginative new take on things. And I imagine he would be quite cute. I would love to hear more, especially about Ratchet and the twins. In the mean time, I'm off to see what other stories you have available.)

Interesting little story, I enjoyed it.

nice.

This is a really interesting fic you have going here from what I've read so far. Ratchet cracks me up with his anger issues with the twins lol! Then again, Ratchet's short fuse is legendary. It's fascinating to read about Megatron and Prime trying to hide their little infatuation thing they have going.
Now this isn't a flame review, I promise. But I urge you to get someone to proof read work for the multitude of grammatical errors. It just takes away from the already flowing storyline. I found myself one time too many trying to figure out what you were trying to say for some parts. Having these errors just interferes with your story and the idea you have going is just so interesting and new that I hate for it to be hindered by these grammatical issues.

And personally, as of now, I find Ironhide quite out of character in regards to him finding out about Optimus. He's too loyal to just blatantly say that Prime is a traitor. Him and a few others. But then again, I do see where he's coming from since It's not common for the leaders of each faction to bond with each other. A tricky scenerio that.
Overall, I love what you have going so far. It really is a good fic. The plot is intriguing, characters are interacting well, and your ideas are sound. Just whenever you have time, review your work and mend the problems to truly build yourself a great fic.
Riki

You do such a great job writting stories that have Optimus, Starscream, and Megatron in them! I would just LOVE to see your version of TF:Prime as a story in the future! I would also like to see a sequel to your story Forbidden Bond! Please can you do a sequel to your wonderful story, PLEASE! I would like to find out of Optimus and Megatron have anymore sparklings together besides the twins that Megatron had sired with his mate, Optimus! I can see it now: Megatron running around the base chasing three or four little sparklings! *giggling at the thought*

wow, best transformers story I read so far