Hey that was great...love the fact Chris left like that and was laughing on the bridge, that was good. Great job.

That was good, love a good fight. Can't wait to see what happens next so I am going to go read it right now. Good job.

Wow!! Great Story!! Maybe there could be a sequel! Just an idea!! LOVE IT! Great you finish it!!

very nice ending. great job with the story. I am looking forward to reading any others that you feel like writing.

yes I like it I had to say what a great story you wrote

please write more soon. When ever you are able too. No rush take care and I hope you will be alright

Well, take your time to return to your normal mindset. And thank you for not killing all of the characters off.

Finally I can review!!This thing wasn't letting me review anything, maybe it was my computer, anyway!! Great story!! O love it, i love Mel's toughtness but i will love to see her bond with Piper!! Keep up the good writting!! Cheers!

Wow, I really am enjoying this story. I like how you incorporated Melinda into the story. I can't wait to read the rest, keep up the good work!

that was cute, I could imagine Victor stumbing and bumbling his way through the TALK...funny, very funny...great job.

Wow, they have to stop him permanently. I thought this chapter was very. I like when Chris and Mel switched powers and the talk from Victor that was funny. Very good job, can't wait for more.

this is good is chris goning to die don't i have a suggestion you should bring prue down and the others future self to the pas in saving chris by using the power of the halliwell line

Great job with the fight. I hope Mel gets healed soon.

Oh you are so evil...lol It is not nice to make me cry...lol But it was a very good chapter...loved it. Can't wait for more. What about little Wyatt though, can't he help? Loved it.

very good job, I liked the fight.