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scout357
2009-10-03 . chapter 1
him fallying off the bed was so funny!
MattsMarshMello
2009-06-23 . chapter 1
The falling off the bed, was amazingly hilarious. <3 Great job!
Myansk
2009-06-05 . chapter 1
good one
The Inimitable DA
2009-05-12 . chapter 1
Aw. I enjoyed reading this. I loved their relationship seemed so natural. I especially liked the last drabble you wrote, because that seemed the most real to me. Sex has got to have a sense of humour sometimes, in my opinion. :)

Brilliant stuff. If you do write another one of these, I'll be delighted. ^^

DA
Hime no Ichigo
2009-04-29 . chapter 1
Ko-chan, you killed me with the last scene. xD
I loved the overall flow though - how they reflect on what they like about each other. Good insight into the character. ^^

` kaoru; hime no ichigo
Chynalee
2009-04-07 . chapter 1
These are great! Theres just the right amount of fluff, naughty, and tenderness (which could be lumped in with fluff...) Anyway, I really think you should continue. You keep it entertaining and keep them in character too! OOC stories for this couple just aren't too much fun to read I've found, so KUDOS to you!
Milli Tora
2009-03-06 . chapter 1
I loved your drabbles! The last one was cute and the others were good was well. I think you should continue, I'd like to read more. =)
A. LaRosa
2009-02-18 . chapter 1
I absolutely love the dynamic you've created in this story between the two of them... and I really hope you do decide to continue this story! :)

-A
Kyuubigami
2009-02-12 . chapter 1
Awesome drabbles.
PokemonCG
2009-02-07 . chapter 1
Aww that was really cute, I love Soul and Maka together, they make such a great couple! And it was so poetically written and it was more loving that lusty, I love fics like that. The only thing, Is start a new paragraph if your gonna skip the lemon scene, from the just before to the after should be a separate paragraph, or atleast a "..." or some astrisks or sumthin. Thats really my only complaint. I really think you should continue.
XNightNoteX
2009-01-25 . chapter 1
totally loved it
iryna
2009-01-25 . chapter 1
I love the last one! LOL, Soul...that's so cute XD

And, yes, continue please! :D
Hanababes
2009-01-22 . chapter 1
ahaha cute xD i love how she was still laughing at him even if they were doing it xP
kibaku0nendo
2009-01-21 . chapter 1
that was really cute! i loved how he fell off the bed, that was hilariouse!just plain hilariouse, i can actually imagine that lol, soul reachin for a condom lol just the thought of that makes me laugh! u must contineu
X Shiki Misaki X
2009-01-21 . chapter 1
Awesome! I loved the end when he fell. I loved all of it! Soul and Maka forever. Cant wait for more!
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