Loved the ending.

AW! It's perfect! All the little details, the Romeo and Juliet reference, it was sooo perfect!)

awesome fic! i loved it!

SAyra

I just reread this story and understood how much I like it!I love Romeo and Juliet and it fit here fic!

Vika

"All that is necessary for the triumph of evil is that good men do nothing
that quote is all over the show. It's Ziva's favorite if I remember correctly.

maybe it's like a theme for the show...

anyway can't wait to see where you take this

I thought I'd sample another piece of your work since I think you're such a brilliant writer... and it was either that or study :P

I loved chapter 1, I thought it was such a great start to the story, I love Romeo and Juliet too so that may have helped but brilliantly in character and really well written.

Chapter 2 was also great, I loved all the characters thoughs and thought the Gibbs/Ziva scene at the end was fantastic and I totally get the not needing conversation thing!
Chapter 3 was excellent (Am I gettin repetitive?) I thought the Tony/Gibbs scene was pure class! :D And McGee is such a sweetie, you did that real well and conveyed Ziva's emotions brilliantly.

Chapter 4 was awesome, and yes I'm very proud I thought Tony knowing about the coffees was so cute, so loved that first TIVA half of the chapter. You gotta love Palmer too though!

Chapter 5... what can I say? *sniff* aw, the Ducky/Ziva scene was very touching and superbly written, I think that you totally have Ducky down brilliantly. The cake description was very nicely done, although I agree there's been so many secrets, lies and sadness
Final chapter! Wow great chapter, perfect ending too, it was an act of genius! Loved the alternation between the scene unfolding in autopsy and Abby and Jimmy hunting for the teacup and LOL it wasn't even lost! :D

Anyways I tend to talk way too much as you may have realized by now so I'm gonna go, awesome story!)

I like it

You did a really good job with this very touching, Tony and ziva were perfect

well done

Kerry

Aww i loved it everything was very well written and the tiva was perfect as per usual and i love the ducky missing tea cup thing lol can't wait for more-D

aww the ending lines were the best.

That was so good.

Oh just a lovely ending...JUST awesomely lovely!

Hi!

Just wanted to say that this story is amazing.I felt all emotions
which were in the story.I like Ziva very much and in this story you managed to show the other side of like it!)

Great little Tiva fic. It was very enjoyable. Well done.

well it would only make sense that Abby plays poker with her priest, I mean she bowls with her nuns right? it seemed like the most logical choice to me.

anyway, this chapter was the best way to end this fic. you brought everything together and left us with some Tiva goodness. The fact that Gibbs and Ducky were watching over them just fit their characters beautifully. I'm still astounded that you captured these characters so perfectly from Tony's stance, Gibbs' question of "how they doing Duck?", Palmer's "how do you mean" to Abby's "Ducky could be Gibbs.
this is one beautifully written story and I can't wait to read the next one