 WhiteElfElder 2009-11-23 . chapter 15Bill has killed and Harry is watching him, but not for the reasons Bill thinks, and now Susan has killed. Things are looking like they are going to start getting a bit more exciting if Sith are showing up. |
 nxkris 2009-11-22 . chapter 15nice last few chapters. i forgot that your story wasn't listed under hp-sw when looking around for it. i like that the war is starting to pick up, love the latest battle for susan also. update soon. |
 Amber Pegasus 2009-11-21 . chapter 15very good chapter! |
 riegert8 2009-11-21 . chapter 15good chapter |
 harlequin320 2009-11-21 . chapter 15keep it up, update soon |
 Nightwing 509 2009-11-21 . chapter 15I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the way you told what was bothering Bill. And the way you described Susan's first Jedi battle. Please update soon. |
 harlequin320 2009-11-10 . chapter 14cool, update soon |
 riegert8 2009-11-02 . chapter 14Very good chapter |
 WhiteElfElder 2009-11-02 . chapter 14This chapter left me very confused. I know that it was about claiming the LeStrange vaults and the Black vaults, but the under-current in the situation with Bill in the middle just muddled things. Is Bill leaning towards the Dark Side or something? |
 Amber Pegasus 2009-11-02 . chapter 14I hope Bill's okay. |
 Nightwing 509 2009-11-02 . chapter 14I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the way you had Harry help Bill deal with the killings he was forced to do. Please update soon. |
 WhiteElfElder 2009-10-19 . chapter 13Why would Ginny not like spending time with Harry, unless it is going to be a conversation about Jac growing up and all that entails? The story was a little jumpy, but I guess that may be because you have to get back into the writing frame of mind and the story flow has to be recaptured.
It looks like our Jedi are about to have some unfriendly guests...should be fun. |
 Amber Pegasus 2009-10-19 . chapter 13very good chapter! |
 Nightwing 509 2009-10-19 . chapter 13I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the way you described how Harry & Ginny were raising the girls. Please update soon. |
 Rogue7 2009-09-09 . chapter 12Great story, there seems to be something missing between the end of Ch 10 & the start of Ch 11, somehow Ginny went from Harry's side in the fight to home with the girls wondering what was happening...
I look forward to the next chapter :) |