 Scrunchy 2009-11-14 . chapter 5Loved it. |
 Scrunchy 2009-11-14 . chapter 1Halfway through this chapter I knew I was going to love this... and I do... onto the next chapter.
Your Spy. Is. AMAZING. |
 ArmoredSoul 2009-10-21 . chapter 5O.O
He just- Let him go?
WHAT?!
Sense. Situation does not make.
But I'm too into the story to care.
HA! |
 ArmoredSoul 2009-10-21 . chapter 3Fuck.
Spy just does NOT have any luck, now does he.
XD |
 ArmoredSoul 2009-10-21 . chapter 1I love, no, ADORE this version of Spy.
All cocky and out for a bit of fun.
AWESOME.
X3 |
 LoneHowler 2009-08-11 . chapter 5Warning to people who haven't read the story, skip my review it has spoilers.
Awesome story at the end I was looking for another chapter half expecting the medic to show up at Blu's headquarters with his equipment in tow looking to defect. After all I don't think staying at Red would be a happy place for him now that his crush was exposed and shot down, things would be very awkward especially when he had to treat sniper |
 xXxSoulKeeperxXx 2009-08-05 . chapter 5*laughs at the end*
"You've obviously never had a good home cooked apple pie."
"What, better than sex?"
"Eh...They score the same." XD I love you for that! Nice twist with the spy and medic, I was half expecting the plan to work, but it instead went completely against him. :) Great story! |
 Generally Maz 2009-04-05 . chapter 5Fantastic story :D |
 anon 2009-01-29 . chapter 5 this is great! write more please... |
 yamiishot 2009-01-24 . chapter 5X3 Awesome, I love you! |
 Timmy-chan 2009-01-24 . chapter 5Needless to say, I loved it. The relationship between Scout and Spy was great and not awkward at all and the connection between Medic and Spy makes tons of sense in your story. The one thing I would suggest you do is to look up some examples of their accents. In the beginning (when there was a lot of dialogue) it was hard to tell who was speaking because the reader didn't have their accents to fall back on when they got confused for as to who was talking. Try listening to the way that each class speaks within the game to get ideas, and looking at other fanfics would help with that too. All in all, really great fic. It was a lot of fun to read! Thanks for this fine addition! |
 Timmy-chan 2009-01-23 . chapter 3That was an AWESOME twist at the end! I love the build-up you created in this chapter- it flowed really well. |