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L Lawli-Pop Lawliet
2009-10-17 . chapter 1
*Drool*
LOVE X3
I've been searching up all the Death Note stories with the word Innuendo in the title or summarry and this HAD to have been one of the best. I wish I could write that good...
snappygirl
2009-10-05 . chapter 1
wohoo~ go yaoi-ness with matt's hacking :D
Sweetheart5793
2009-08-27 . chapter 1
This was so funny! Mello is just evil sometimes! But that's what makes him so awesome!
Dlvvanzor
2009-07-10 . chapter 1
XD That rocked! And was very hot. O.O
RazorLike
2009-06-20 . chapter 1
No matter what you say, this stuff is a reall turn on and slightly dirty...but so damn great!

x
jrenee07
2009-06-17 . chapter 1
Very nice. I'll admit I grinned like an idiot through this whole thing...and the last line was perfect. :)
Scorpling
2009-02-27 . chapter 1
Just awesome.. So fu-king awesome XD
You're my idol
Inuyasha4eva
2009-02-01 . chapter 1
That was epic! XD
flamablechoklit
2009-01-25 . chapter 1
Oh, that was win.
Tobi Tortue
2009-01-22 . chapter 1
Excellent work, you.

Ah... the innuendo abounded in this, and made me happy. The ending, especially... "Access granted"?? BWAHAHAHA!! That, and "Plasma's... hot" were probably my favorite parts. I don't really know what else to say, actually, because it was short, sweet, and satisfying. :3
OvenBased
2009-01-22 . chapter 1
Hah, I guessed that would be the line just after I read it >> Good story. Very suggestive, damn Matty must type fast! O.O
Living in a fantasy
2009-01-21 . chapter 1
You make me melt when you write Matt and Mello. Seriously. This was wonderful. If sickness and finals were'nt still destorying my soul I could type something to better sum up the greatness of this and your writing, but as it is, this is all I can come up with. Keep writing and I'll keep reading

You've made me fave this and I now have about 280 stories faved. I've TRIED to make the list smaller but it is impossible.
The Angelic Demoness
2009-01-21 . chapter 1
OMG YAY! :D

That was so priceless...seriously. I'm so happy I quoted that line...so happy.

"You know if you were a geek, you'd be really turned in right now" "Would I be?" HAHA, amazing Mello retort. Loved it. I spazzed.

*snicker* I know I already told you all this...but still, and you made an attempt at a dirty joke *is proud* "invade someone with all my strength" HAHA...what's amusing is as soon as I read that, I was all haha, that's naughty. And then you continued with Mello making it an innuendo and it made my day. I think like your Mello! YAY!! *is wearing leather*

Gah, Mello is such a tease in this story, it makes me smile. Way to have Mello torment poor Matt...that was a great scene. And left so much for me to imagine while still making me squeal (rather loudly I might add...well, you know that sort of, you got the aftereffects, LOL)

"Access granted" *snort* Good ending.

All in all, this is made of win *nodnod*
Crazy Little Feline
2009-01-21 . chapter 1
Oh, gosh. You plus Angelic Demoness NEVER EQUALS SANITY. I'm rather excited to read this, though, I must say. XD

“When you’re pulling a particularly tough maneuver, you look like a kid that’s heisted the cookie jar.” PFFT. *snicker* I just find it so amusing that you used the word HEISTED. It makes the whole thing sound so much more serious.

I love how you describe Mello from Matt's point of view; from the corner of the eye or off the reflection of the computer screen. Very nice.

“You know, if you were a geek, you’d be really turned on right now.” *SNORT* HAH. XD

Invade someone, yes... *grin* Good job noticing that one, Matt. X3

“Your hacking does turn me on, Matt.” NEXT SCENE= HOT. AND THE ENDING AND OMG. Wow. HELL, they barely did anything, but that was... wow. HOW DO YOU DO THAT, WOMAN?!

Ahem. Yes. VERY NICE. *nod* XD
SmashTurnip Girl
2009-01-21 . chapter 1
That last line killed me.
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