I can't stop re-reading this. It was so sad and beautiful. I love emotional and dark fics like this. I especially liked how you wrote using Joy's perspective and how you conveyed her guilt and anger at herself. It seemed very well done. This is definetly one of my favorite fics.

Wow, just...wow.

It's cool how you used a oy for this, since the Joys are rarely used at all, much less in first person. And the ghost's true identity and the Joy's constant guilt was a nice touch.
I'm not so sure about Ho-oh's (I assume it's Ho-oh) appearance. It seems odd that a legend would be so late. I think just having Misty, Brock, and Jenny arrive was enough.

Cya!

For most people, shock comes slowly to a person, and tears come forst. For me, shock comes first.

This fic is bueautiful in a dark kind of way.*sniff
All I have to say now is...

wow.

...Write another chapter, about Ash and Misty. Please

Oh, /wow/. I loved that fic. I am dark and morbid.. but I loved it ... especially that last part. 'It's the /should/...' So true ... now I feel like I want to write another angsty Reiu-'fic with that kind of stuff c_c But I won't. ;7 Because I have writer's block. BUT THIS WAS A /GREAT'FIC! I loved it! You wrote through Joy's POV /perfectly/, and I actually /liked/ her ... and I usually detest Joys c.c; Great 'fic!

... ... ... ... Why'd ya have ta kill Ash! ... ... ... It was a good fic anyway. Dark...yes, very dark... Well, people have reason to write such dark fics. Wish I could... Anyway, this was great! I love your stories!

That was a little creepy:shudders This fic has alot of potential. I want to see more chapter! As for your Hotaru fic from Cherry Blossom and ? (sorry I forgot) I agree we need more Hotaru centred ficcie. If you want to read more Please check out Chibizoo: Balancing the Silence and Angelus Hotaru: Mommy Dearest. (They're both excellent, well at least give it a try if you decided to branch out to Sailor Moon fics.) At least, that's what I did since I love both Sailor Moon and Pokemon I made mine into a crossover!

*gapes and sniffles Wow! Powerful and sad When I read the summary, I was expecting something *extremely* dark... Strangely, I was pleasantly surprised. Sure, Ash and Pikachu's death was a tad gruesome, but it's tempered by the fact that they sacrificed themselves for the "greater good just like the Nurse Joy says, they're angels. I am curious however, the "glowing, golden bird" Ho-oh perhaps? Would be fitting: first seen at the start of Ash's journey, and it's there to see the end...

Bravo!

*sticks her jaw back into place, continues to stare, then slowly, gradually, puts her hands together, making a loud noise each time, slowly gaining speed and volume, and sooner or later finds her voice* THAT...definitely deserves a round of applause...My eyes and jaw somehow got stuck in the "open" position, but I think I'll be okay...Very beautiful...Tat's all...*_(hey, i did a meredith-style review! kinda...okay dun mind me. really..*o.O)