Beautiful story, I love it :) Kinda gives a deeper meaning to the games I've played through thousands of times. Good work!

First time reviewing your fic. Sorry if you already forgot about fanfiction (which, in my opinion, isn't all that likely)

Red's original name was Yellow? Well that makes sense, seeing that Electricity was never part of the original RGB group, no matter how many people (including me) say RBY.

Shounen-ai... I can only see it in the last paragraph, the rest speaks of friendship, but a deep one.

This fic was beautiful.

so sad *sniff*

Oh man. That was good. I liked how it was written and it kinda stired something inside of me. Not in a gross way or anything, but it was just touching. A sad love story.

Quite interesting in a eirey sort of way.
-Red

Oh that was sweet even if you did make Blue and Yellow gay. Always it was sweet to have Blue think that way of Yellow. I loved it.

wow... good fic. I think it's great. Good job!

strange...

I love this fic, btu I still can't belive that you wrote it. My favorite AAML author. I'm so happy! I really like this one.

But I can barely figure out whos who. Red/yellow...Ash? Blue Gary... and Green May? or Misty..

So, so sad! And your handling of thought progression is unbelievable - truly unbelievable. *salute*

Okay, pardon me while I ramble for a moment. Two nights ago I had a dream that you posted a new story, and in my dream I thought, "Darn, I'm falling behind. I still haven't reviewed her latest fic!" Then I woke up and thought..."Dear mercy, I'm chastising myself even in my dreams!" *lol* So I decided to finally read it and review. Maybe you'll forgive me for the long time it took-I'm in the middle of university finals at the moment! Bleh... -;;; Well, as for the actual story itself! Awww. It's so sad. Well, it is angst... ;;; But you know what I mean. And I'm quite tolerant, so it doesn't matter that it's yaoi (is that the rght word?), it's still sweet. And this is really good, as usual, but I've got to admit, only having played Pokemon Red, I don't know very much about the background. You wouldn't be able to enlighten me, would you? Seeing as this review is now as long as the story itself, I'd better go now...but I just thought it was funny I had a dream about your story, and I thought you might laugh too! Bye now.. -

I told you. Good reviews. *_x* It's awesome, as I said before. Very sweet, sadly romantic . . . tinged with regret. You are becoming a master of first person pov, you know that? *_x*

wow, you are so good at this. I wish I could write like this. Other then that I have nothing to say.

*sigh* beautiful. I know you said it was based solely on the game, Dragoness, but I could so easily fit it to Gary and Ash (but that's probably due to the fact that I picture Red and Blue as Ash and Gary in the games anyway :) ) Well done.

(actually, Red and Yellow...oy, based on the GAME. That's different then!)

Very nice! And sad! I always wanted to be able to tell Red's mom where he is! *kicks her Crystal cartrdge*