Love it! Light is both an awesome and evil big brother. I've always liked the idea that maybe if he didn't have so much to hide he'd let his 'perfection' slip a bit more around Sayu than his parents. I'd really love to see L help her get revenge.

Aww :)

Aww, that's very cute! I think you captured Sayu's personality nicely. I don't see much fanfiction about her.

Also, Light is an awesome big brother here.

Also, this is an awesome story.

Oh God, there is some much awesome about this story. Light is a great mean older brother. And all those lines - I was cracking up all the time. "Never trust anyone whose organs aren't on the inside." - Genius. I love it.

Super cute, I loved it!

Aw, this is really cute and funny. And something I could totally see happening in a happier, Death Note-free universe. :D

... XD! I love it!

Way too cute and awesome for words. Cheeky Light and Sayu ftw _

ROFL Light is so manipulative XD And I can't see L helping Sayu unless he's getting something out of it, but the thought strikes me as funny.

"The little...!

"Bastard!" Sayu snarls."

lol

Haha, I liked this. And Light is such a cheeky, bastard. XD

I like your Sayu - we never see very much of her, and I didn't like her much to begin with, so that's an achievement.

I also like gently snarky, happy Light. He's just like he was in the first few chapters of the canon.

Ah, I knew I'd love it when i saw it was Matsu/Sayu and Light/L. I love both of those pairings.

Light's a sneaky little brat, but I almost sawthe recorder coming. I could see it as something Light would do.

I'd also love to see Sayu (and L) exact her revenge. I bet it would be sweet.

Hee he. I like this one. I would be cool if you continued it so we could see how Sayu gets back at Light...hah ahaha...:) An excellent job again!

YES SAYU get L! MWUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

That was so good!

“Is it Matsuda?” he asks.

Of course Light would know. :P

“L is seven years older than you,” she announces, “and a guy.”

Hahahaa...

“Matsuda’s eleven years older than you,” he returns, “and a guy.”

Baahahahahahaa...

“Sneaking out at midnight and slandering your parents? Sayu, Sayu… What are we going to do with you?”

Seriously...where do you come up with this stuff? Genius.

"She’ll be revenged on Light one of these days.

…maybe she’ll get L to help."

Now THAT I'd like to see. Heh.

That was so good. I enjoyed reading this very much. :)