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Reviews for: The Love Of A Gazebo
Samaire Rose
2009-05-08 . chapter 1
Definitely well-written and in-character. A situation like this makes me a little uncomfortable though, considering if it were me, I would not want the guy whom I was marrying to kiss another girl for the last time other than me, if he's supposed to love me. But this still made for excellent reading, and since I have an appreciation for Zogan too, I'm good. But I'm with Erika in her review for this, it was kind of cryptic at the end ... But still, very good story!

I'd love it if you wrote another Zogan piece, one where it was either in the pre-Quogan time frame, or you know, an AU piece, one where Logan hadn't dated Quinn (but there was no mention of her really, I have an extremely hard time reading stories where Quinn is with someone other than Logan, unless it's Vince, but that's kind of complicated for me to explain. But you get the picture). You wrote them so well here! Oh and if you ever got the inspiration for a Quogan story ... do act on it! You would do a phenomenal job with them, I'm sure!

Also can't wait for updates of "Would You Mind". =)

-Haley
Heart of the Lullaby
2009-01-22 . chapter 1
Song!!
This little oneshot is absolutely adorable!
All my favorite couples in there (Chola, Zogan, and even a dash of Quogan).

You gave Zogan wonderful closure :)

I wish I could've given you a longer review, but I have projects loaded on me and need to finished before the end of the semester (tomorrow).

Also, good luck with posting the FF Awards and the current wedding challenge. Hopefully, I'll post something soon ;)
Her Name Is Erika
2009-01-22 . chapter 1
Song, this was lovely. I'm quite thrown no one has reviewed this, but I will be the first!

Back to the actual purpose of the review:

I actually felt very...what's the word? Centered. That's what I meant to say. I'm not a fan of Zogan, even though I find it invigorating to write and even mentally challenging. I usually find Quogan quite easy, but I'm learning to open myself to the idea of Zogan. But I got my balance of Quogan and Zogan, and when everything is balanced, Erika is one happy gal.

Lol, I feel quite silly today and feel the need to refer to myself in third person, but yes, I love it. Even with the Zogan, I loved it. The ending though, I feel was cryptic. It could lean towards the Quogan - Logan still loves Quinn deeply but had to address the lingering feelings for Zoey, and may have acheived some kind of inner peace doing it or can lean towards Zogan - Zoey and Logan finally realize their feelings for each other in some unspoken way. Ah, I don't know, but that's how I see it.

Again, I enjoyed this oneshot.

Keep writing, and I defintely review.

-Erika

PS. Have you compiled the result for the FF Awards yet?
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