 thefullmetalAlchemistcayla 2009-12-21 . chapter 8"As long as Misa doesn't end up with one of them. She's such a ditz." I agree. misa is a ditz =P haha |
 ThunderRiver411 2009-04-25 . chapter 10This is a pretty good story. Continue soon.
I'm finally working on something after a long time of not writing. Check it out sometime. |
 200Dreams 2009-04-06 . chapter 9well thank you for FINALLY updating! You don't know how long i've waited for the next chapter! |
 200Dreams 2009-03-21 . chapter 8you know, Mandark should really mature more. Like... use words like "Cool" more often. :) |
 Aneko Kitana 2009-03-16 . chapter 7I love this story...And I think that the mild conflicts are more suitable to the two, since they have grown up alot since the initial show. Its a good way to portray the older ..."pre-teen?"...(I'll go with that) versions of Dexter and Mandark. The silent pleading scene was hilarious! Oh, and by no means would you being a Nerd be a bad thing...being a "dork" is a bad thing! XD
Seriously, how does Dexter put up with being called "Dorkster"...Poor little guy...( Dork is the scientific name for a whale penis...XP (( I'm A Nerd! 8D )) ) |
 200Dreams 2009-03-16 . chapter 7YOU NEED TO UPDATE! I'm begging! |
 Riley Hearth 2009-03-14 . chapter 6This is fantastic. I absolutely love it. /Please/ let us know what happens next! |
 Nuit Douce 2009-02-27 . chapter 6Wow. Olga wins the KISS award (Keep it simple stupid) with the last line. Very casual question, lol. Cool story! |
 200Dreams 2009-02-08 . chapter 5update soon! :) |
 200Dreams 2009-02-06 . chapter 4update soon :) |
 Twonk 2009-01-30 . chapter 4Cool stry, though i wouldn't rate it K+... funny- though you cut off mid-sentence at the end. Please write some more. XD |