Really liked the way you portrayed Reno, particularly the point of him turning in all his work on time it's fresh and that's the way I see him. Good job and keep up the good work.

I'm really glad to see you writing again! :) I missed the cute, sort of... sadish Turk stories. It's a wonderful snippited bunch of progressions.

'Lo Sabe,

Am I allowed to say that my favourite parts of this story were Tseng's top hat, the soccer ball, and the jade plant? Because I really liked the little plant.

I enjoyed this. It was a little bit difficult to follow at points - not impossible, of course, but since so many small events were getting stacked on top of each other (forwards and back) between paragraphs, it was sometimes a little bit difficult to know how we were supposed to be reacting to each of them.

Then again, it did have Rude in a bunny suit and that's not something you see every day!

An enjoyable story... I just wish that I'd felt a little bit more anchored in it, I suppose. Still, it was charming and light and hopeful and those are always lovely things.

-T. pirate

i've always liked disjointed stories. but i'm just weird like that, i guess. :)

very beautiful and there's something so...rich about it (the writing style, i mean). every time i read one of your stories i always get nostalgic. lovely characterization and dialogue. and lets not forget those wonderful, wonderful details.

Very well done, although it does seem a little disjointed at the beginning. All in all, a good read.

regards Skykhanhunter