 Omgoth 2009-11-17 . chapter 7this is a good story, I just have a few comments. The suffixes, like -sensei, and -chan, are connected to the name, there is no space between them. Also, you're being very vague when you describe the training they're doing, it would be good if you included a bit more detail. |
 someone179 2009-11-07 . chapter 7great chapter as usual :)
hope you update soon :D |
 someone179 2009-11-07 . chapter 3lmao it's like noone wants sakura
your fic's great :D |
 someone179 2009-11-07 . chapter 2lol nice ending :D |
 FireNekoDemoness 2009-10-12 . chapter 7I love Naruto's nickname and the idea surrounding this fanfic and hope to see it continued. Also I enjoy the team placement more then I thought I would. =D
FireNekoDemoness |
 troth5 2009-09-30 . chapter 7i liked this chapter and i cant wait to read it. |
 Fenrir89 2009-09-14 . chapter 7damn good story if i say so...
please continue your good work |
 turbomagnus 2009-09-13 . chapter 3I'm impressed. Most of the time when you read 'different team' stories, it's to get Naruto and another character on the same time and then just stuff whoever together to fill the gaps...
But you not only placed Naruto and Ino on the same team - and gave a logical reason for it as well - but adjusted the remaining teams in a way that also makes sense when one looks at it.
Applause. |
 Sonic Sound 2009-09-12 . chapter 7Please hurry and update this story. |
 nyanya-woof91 2009-08-30 . chapter 7So far I like reading this story, I hope to see more of it soon |
 Lake25 2009-08-26 . chapter 7i just wanted to tell you that i enjoyed the story so far and hope that you'll continue it soon.
ciao^^ |
 TheDancingKiller 2009-07-27 . chapter 7another brilliant story...though it has been another one of the stories that you have written that had been an idea that you just had bouncing around your head I would like to remind you that it is a good story and that it has been 4 months since your last update and I really want you to update and continue writing because I dont think another writer could do ur story the justice it deserves for being so very kick assingly awesome |
 DustBunnyQueen 2009-07-20 . chapter 6Love the story so far, I'm glad you decided to free the plot bunny and let it run rampant. As a side note, I noticed that you put Naruto at three feet tall, that's about the size of a five or six year old. so unless Naruto is a little person (midgedt, I think it might be a typo. Or, maybe you wanted him that tall, not sure. Other than that, great work! |
 TenchiSaWaDa 2009-07-13 . chapter 1Because you have said Shikamaru is your Fav char i shall favorite you
P.S you write pretty good ideas and storylines |
 riptocs 2009-06-28 . chapter 7 MORE!
Please, I love how this story is turning out! |