this could have been excellent... had it been a private conversation.The inclusion of the demonlord was unreallistic and made it feel like what it was: set up and fake

I thought it was really sweet...Good job!

Man, i really cant see sesshomaru getting close to tears. Seriously. Angry, yeah. And i mean, I've seen him when rin is kidnapped (yes, i finally finished the manga!) and he gets **... but yeah, i guess this would be different. Anywho, fluffimcflufferson lol. :)

Aw! That was so cute!

Aw... Gonna need am insolin shot after that bit of sugar!

Very nicely done!

Ronwixziv

Lovely. Keep going with it.

That was cute. Nicely done.
-D101

aww this was so cute. brilliant story