i thought thier names were elle and dias lag? oh never mind maybe i was wrong. anyway great chapter! _

Man...okay, you left me speechless with that! AWSOME MAN! -

Can I write a sequel? Plz? I have a great idea for one... *watery kawaii chibi eyes* Plz?

Interesting, especially since it's from the view of someone who hasn't watched the TV series. A well-written piece of Elle-oriented fiction. _ I look forward to any future work.

this is GREAT! a few booboos, but really, really GOOD. i swear. it's EEEVIL,you don't have that many reviews; you deserve a BAZILLION! mebbe more... great flow of consciousness and word usage (tell me when i start makin' sense, i'm kinda high on ice cream;)but uhhhh, isn't Elle-san's hair red? (i haven't seen the movie yet or anything, so if i make any booboos, forgive moi.) ja! LUV IT!

This was a great fic. It was written really well! Great job!

That is by far the best angsty story I have ever read. It is uterly fantastic and I can say little more except that it fits perfectly with the Shadow Skill story line. Please make as many more as you can