sounds interesting ^^
looking forward to more!

-Mulan-

Good beginning !
You should continue this.

YOU NEVAR TOLD ME that you were writing this cute ** story.
WHAT ARE THESE SHENANIGANS! JASPERS KYUUTE!
Oh but what if Bella was like 50 years old! for reals!
she'd be all omg ALICE let me turn up my hearing aid (jkjk)
Lawl, funny yet sad.
Edward would be all: OH THE WASTED YEARS! -_- (thats how a vampire cries)
write MORRE

that was amazing...totaly different...I want more...pls update soon...

Wow.This is a great story.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter (:

it good. keep writing it!

THIS! is a good story! I like it alot! I cant wait for the next chapter!

this is really good please continue! :D

loving it!!