this is so good! please add more

Don't worry! You haven't lost me with the delay. :) I am still very interested to see where you take this story and I appreciate the update! Great chapter, and I look forward to more.

Good story! can't wait to see where this is going! PPS

Hey your story is just great...its so consistent and I love how you use the details of Eli and Olivia's maternal side..its really good...please continue it soon!

Great job!
Loved it!

good chapter
please update soon

Good grief living the single parent life andbeing a cop must be exhausting! Of course we all know Liv could do it. She can do anything she sets her mind to after all. Can't wait to read more!

I started reading this on (I think) SVUfiction, but I don't believe this chapter was posted there yet (at least I certainly don't remember reading it before!) so I was pleasantly surprised to come across it here! Thank you for writing another story, and I am excited to see where this one will take us and our illustrious detectives. :)

This was great!

I loved it!

cant wait for more!

I like it so far and I'm very interested in seeing what happens next. So, keep up the good work and please update soon.

~Books

this is such a cute story! I was just wondering if this was going to be E/O at any point

Great story so far.
Please update soon.

I have a feeling this story is going to be very bittersweet.

I love the bit with the pushy mom on the swings, awesome! You've written the Eli/Liv interaction particularly well, I can't wait for more!!
I hope Elliot & Kathy don't crash!

Bah humbug... I'm an E/O shipper and I HATE Kathy. Just kill Kathy off and Elliot and Olivia can run off to Hawaii while KATHY'S MOM watches the kids... you know, the Mom Kathy ran home to when she left Eliot?



Just my opinion.


~Pix~