Excellent work! Truly amazing! The idea of Snape creating and manipulating a golem is perfectly in character for both Snape and the general story line. He is, after all, an alchemist first and foremost.

I've seen this same trick about a thousand different ways done in a psychology text book. It stopped being fun after the fifth author, despite slightly better subject matter you made it no better. As long as all the letters are their the first and last letter are in the right place and length is okay the brain can automatically decode it. That is the same reason people have a lot of trouble with the word does and dose in English, to the brain they look practically the same. Try better writing and less gimmicks next time. The story also was kinda lacking, you must have known a decent amount about neurology to do this, you can't tell me that you missed the the fact that the kind of wound Snape had was spraying due to placement. It just didn't leak out when he feel over and the fact the snake would have had a mouth full of clay would have been a big freaking hint to anyone at all.

aww such a lovely one shot!

How cool, that was pretty fun and I liked Severus not being killed off that way.

oh hell, i'm not an english native speaker. though i gave it a try, it was imposible XD

It was very entertaining thank you! Oddly, some of the words make sense spelled wrong, while some of them don't, to me. I didn't have any trouble with short words- fkae, Spane/Sapne, gloem... But I had trouble with words that had (1) multiple syllables and (2) words respelled it in such a way that the letters no longer even fall into the syllable they were supposed to... Like "Sndeudly" or "rruten" My brain became so hung up on seeing the letters SND together, or RR for example, that it could not cope with the idea that this would be a word in the English language. So cool.

Bully for him! The scrambling didn't really work for me, but the story sure did.

hahaha that was cool! I loved this! Very fun and new!

God, how did you get so much time on your hands? That was the biggest pain in the ass to read but I'm happy to say I got through it! It was hard on a couple of sentences but mostly I read it with little difficulty. But siriusly! Gosh!

Spane? lol! Wow, how on earth did I comprehend that first part? Nice twist, with the golem. I've seen that term in other fic you've written. Is it an original creation?

That last line had me Awing out loud.
Lovely alternative, I had to read the scrambled part out loud to get the words right. It was very entertaining. Some of the words I couldn't, for the life of me, unscramble but I kept going without looking down at the unscrambled version. Proud of myself there, ahaha. "Whomp Mode." I loved that.

I really love fics where Severus has the opportunity to live his life without being tied down by his 'masters'. If only it were canon. /sigh

Anyway, looking forward to what you come up with next...-Cree

i didnt realise you put an unscrambled version at the end until i had read the other:L still i got through it just a little bit lo nger than it would normally take. blialirnt ieda toguhh. i loved the flying snape, da dadada its super snape;L

Wish this truly happened...would make all my tears worthless.

This was good! I'm surprised I could actually read the scrambled version lol!

lol, I read something about this once. The brain can make out the word even though the letters are jumbled. It was a little jarring but I could still read it. As far as the alternate ending goes, that was original.