You may never even read this (it's been so long!), but here it is; I liked your story! It was very well written! Keep up the great work!

Excellent! You suceeded in providing vivid imagery. Wonderfully well-written.

I like the story. One thing though wasn't the guy who had the paper before Gary, Lucious Snow?

Excellent story, you captured perfectly the style and art of Early Edition. I assume you are a big fan of the show? I was, but they took it off of CBS and I dont have cable, so, I never saw it again. You would have been a good writer for the show. Cool story!!