Hello,

This was very well done. You captured the episodic feel from the show perfectly. I could see and here everything just like it was one of the normal episodes. One minor critique: if the last paragraph was a reference to Mr. Snow, the previous recipient of the paper, his first initial was 'L', not 'J'.

Excellent writing,

The PreacherMan

Very nice story. Like the way you interwove who the lady was (not a stripper) and the other parts of the plot. Keep up the good writing !

You may never even read this (it's been so long!), but here it is; I liked your story! It was very well written! Keep up the great work!

Excellent! You suceeded in providing vivid imagery. Wonderfully well-written.

I like the story. One thing though wasn't the guy who had the paper before Gary, Lucious Snow?

Excellent story, you captured perfectly the style and art of Early Edition. I assume you are a big fan of the show? I was, but they took it off of CBS and I dont have cable, so, I never saw it again. You would have been a good writer for the show. Cool story!