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STU
2009-11-02 . chapter 15
*Just fin reading story and saga* Done I LOVE YOUR WORK ker-plop well done congrats if your saga WAS A REAL MANGA I would buy it I to V. Katan is like The Emporor from Star Wars. Takato and Jeri love eachother it's so cute. The saga is very well done 10/10 I just love the line "Goggles... Sword... TAICHI... Gloves... SORA..." 100% funny oh and Sora takes over Davis' narrater is funny. I love the end of this chpter this SHOULD BE REAL Digimon will be givein a second chance and a Author you whant to check out is 'Dakari-King Mykan' one of my favroite authors on the site. Now all the saga needs an opening song for 01 OP Song 'Butter-Fly' by Wada Kouji 02 OP Song 'Target ~Akai Shougeki~' by Wada Kouji 03 OP Song 'The Biggest Dreamer' by Wada Kouji great songs listin to them on YouTube or just download to MP3 AND A GREAT SAGA DIGIMON FOREVER.
GoggleheadEXE
2008-09-08 . chapter 15
Oh wow! This definetly deserves Ten Crests outta Ten Crests! I absolutely loved this fanfic, every single detail, down to giving Takao yellow and blue goggles and to Mt. Fuji nearly erupting. Speaking of Takato's goggles, how'd they turn yellow and blue anyway and why are are they that color?? If you made Truckos look like Optimus Prime, you are so sued..by Hasbro of course! But there's something I've noticed in chapter 7. Don't mind me borrowing soem descriptions; "Suzie was wearing a pink jacket and a fluffy, white beret". That's what Kari wore in 02 during the World Tour. Whereas "Ryo wore a marble-colored jacket and dark blue mittens". That's what Davis wore in 02. "Kazu and Kenta each had gray jackets on, which didn't really say much one way or the other." Those two wore what Ken was wearing during 02."Henry wore an army-green windbreaker and stood silently by the shed." That's what Izzy wore in 02. But "Rika leaned against a cold tree dressed in a black, leather jacket". That's what Matt wore in 02, only it wasn't leather, and it was more of a trench coat. And here we go..."Jeri donned a light blue jacket and a lavender scarf with green mittens." That's what Sora wore during Christmas in 02! Here we go... "Takato wore a blue jacket with brown paw prints on the sides of the shoulders. It went very well with his yellow-and-blue gogles and dark blue earmuffs." That's what Tai wore during Christmas in 02, minus the yellow and blue goggles and the earmuffs. But HIS winter outift didn't have brown paw prints, they were yellow! Nice making a few differences between the goggleheads' World Tour outfits. Why did you give 'em these outfits? ANSWER THE QUESTIONS ASAP! Take your time though...
Mario Tobler
2003-10-04 . chapter 15
awsome story, keep up the good work
Jedi Takeru
2003-10-04 . chapter 13
*hums carol of the bells*
Jedi Takeru
2003-10-04 . chapter 14
it is a good story
Jedi Takeru
2003-10-04 . chapter 15
baka. it's Toei. not Toy

2003-10-03 . chapter 15
You got some of the Tamers' Japanese name mixed up in most of the chapters, despite the fact that you used the dub first name nicknames even though the last name might be different in both version.

Here is the correct version of the Tamers' name (and for future reference):

Japanese to Dub (going by first name, last name)

Takato Matsuda - Takato Matsuki

Juri Katou - Jeri Katou

Ruki Makino - Rika Nonaka (not Nokido)

Jenrya Lee - Henry Wong
Jiangliang Li (Chinese)

Shuichon Lee- Suzie Wong
Shaochung Li (Chinese)

As you can see, Lee is the correct family surname, not Jenrya (which is Henry's Japanese first name)

Hirokazu Shioda/Shiota - Kazu Shioda/Shiota

Kenta Kitagawa - Same

Ryo Akiyama - Same

Alice Mccoy - Same

Nami Asaji - Same

A good overall story that have finally completed its course over 2 years, despite the fact that Impmon's tamers, Ai (girl) and Mako (boy) weren't involved.
The Supreme Dragon Knight
2003-08-13 . chapter 14
This an amazing Fic, I must read more. So
PLEASE continue!
the mighty lu bu
2003-04-03 . chapter 1
Looks good so far. i read the rest when i can
zepyrmons_spirit
2003-02-17 . chapter 11
YuugiAnzu Cemetary?! Arent those names from Yu-Gi-Oh? Oh well. What WAS that green stuff Jeri got in her mouth when Touga kissed her? Was he a bug before? I hate him. What's with Rika?

~zepyrmons_spirit
starfruit06
2002-12-22 . chapter 10
You are one of my favorite authors here on fanfiction.net. I admire your work. please hurry up with the next chapters!!!!!! Please!!!!!
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2002-12-07 . chapter 10
keep up the good work taiora/jukato/ryika 4ever death to sorato
Luvya
2002-10-02 . chapter 9
I admit I was sepitcal about the whole Juri/Takato thing but I have to admit this whole fic is pretty good... expcially the whole deal with episode 38 (LOVE Rika's action's towards Matt!!!!!) oh well... plz continue... (oh and I also liked the prolodge that was AWESOME!!!)
Dejitaru Yami
2002-10-01 . chapter 9
They haven't found Rika yet? Oh, boy. -_-;;.

Katourimon: You can say that again. Although next time don't show Takato doing whatever Impmon called it on Jeri okay? Us Digimon aren't all that interested in human.....bondings.

Katourimon.... All well. It was pretty good. Hope they find Rika. Where was she after all this time?
DigiDestined of Courage
2002-09-30 . chapter 9
They've got to keep doing that quite a lot, don't they? Figuring out every move each step of the way...Keep up the good work!
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