 brightsun89 2009-11-28 . chapter 19love it!! please update soon!! |
 Lainana 2009-11-07 . chapter 19This was very very humourous. I enjoyed it for some odd reason HnG ftw!
I just recently re-watched the anime.
And now I just felt the urge to go out and find a good fic about it. And I found one ;3 I'm happy to have found it too.
I was also wondering if you had any suggestions on fic?
I could give some crazy Lainana styled advice if you do! |
 irezel 2009-09-02 . chapter 19you really do have a very interesting ability to keep the same character but give a different twist. i admire that. :)
this is really an awesome fanfiction, and i can't wait until you update again! hope it's soon!! :) |
 Phamtom of the Pie 2009-08-30 . chapter 19I like this a lot! Hikaru is a little out of character, but seeing as he's from America in your fic it makes sense. Definitely one of the funniest fics I've read. Please update soon! |
 isodel 2009-08-16 . chapter 19This is one of the best HnG AUs I've ever read.
As soon as I read Hikaru's karaoke suggestions I knew that I had to favorite this story.
Hikaru's struggle with Japanese seems very true to life. I know everyone in my Japanese class was mystified when our teachers told us how to say McDonalds. |
 breadsticks 2009-08-15 . chapter 19I just LOVE Hikaru's voice and his complete tactless behavior and his love for McDonalds.
(Btw, while reading this, I suddenly became very hungry for a Big Mac...Darn your Hikaru's infectious appetite. XD)
Thanks for writing! |
 Jaur 2009-08-14 . chapter 19Interesting and refreching perspective on the story. Pleas keep it up. There are far to few stories based on HNG that are worth reading. Usually they are boring, oneshots or yaoi. Sometimes all three... |
 Failing Mentality 2009-08-04 . chapter 19Now I feel like crap because of my wilting Mandarin learning.
But great twist! |
 Nexus of Dark World 2009-08-02 . chapter 12This is a brilliant story, the language barrier aspect of your story is rather inticing, I can't wait to read more. It rather reminds me of one of the sub plots in my current novel, so its nice to see another person also doing it. keep up the good work. |
 00asianwriter00 2009-07-27 . chapter 19I'm kinda curious about what happened after Hikaru won the Amateur Meijin and bolted; wouldn't the Go Weekly magazine have at had a report on it and all? Wouldn't the top pros like Kawabara and all be interested to know that Hikaru had won the title at such a young age? It would make for an interesting chapter and I'm kinda suprised that Hikaru isn't popular in the Go Association for coming into it all the time. =3 |
 00asianwriter00 2009-07-27 . chapter 11Yay! Finally, Sai's so cool and awesome X3 Good job so far, keep up the good work. By the way, what ever happened to Hikaru's grandfather? Did he die and did Hikaru's family inheiret his house or something? |
 00asianwriter00 2009-07-26 . chapter 6It's not really that long, since there are even longer chapters too that some people write well over 50+ pages; you could try to lengthan the chapter by writing other character's perspectives and stuff, like Waya's and Nase's for instance (you could squeeze them in together for a long chapter, both from Hikaru's point of view and everyone else's; I'm quite curious as to what they think of Hikaru and what they actually "said"). A good expample is of a chapter for instance from Leitur's fanfic, The Never-ending Road. |
 oO Yukiko Oo 2009-07-26 . chapter 19Ohmygod!
I find your story to be hilarious!
Especially dialogue! I'm suchh a huge fan of equal amounts of both dialogue and script and you've somehow did that AND added good amounts of humor in it too!
I love you for it (:
Please, PLEASE, update soon for I'll definitely be looking forward to it! (: |
 Stargazer 2009-07-26 . chapter 19 u gotta updat.e |
 00asianwriter00 2009-07-26 . chapter 4Hm... Maybe you could ask if you get some people who play Go to help you write the story, perhaphs asking Leitbur to help you, since he's a writer on here and plays go. He also wrote a rather good informative fanfic called The Never-ending Road, where he lists the terms and stuff so reading the fanfic can help you learn go a bit (heck, he even bases his matches in the fanfic off of real matches, just like the canon). |