...I read the description and came in with high hopes of epic Mumm-Ra-on-Lion-O molestation.

Instead, Mumm-Ra's just being his usual creeper self.

Sadness. ;-;

exelent descritions! i can just picture a stormy night in my head right now

A very well written story. I really hope you will write some more chapters.

It was really fun reading it. Thanks for this ^^

Marc

More soon please.

I enjoyed it.

Can't wait to see what happens =)