oh yeah. Things are definatly back on track. I loved this as an alternate ending (i guess you could call it) to that particular episode. Jess and Don are lucky to have one another!

This fits in very well with the episode. I like the way Jess is even able to get Danny embarrassed. I'm glad she forgave Don for his angry outburst. I love that he was worried about her when he noticed her wincing. The teasing in the end was cute too.

Because i like totally LOVE Angell and F/A is my favourite pairing i loved this i like your Flack ANgell stories :)

That was so great! Angell's thoughts are what I got out of the show. I love it, Danny running interference between Don and Angell, what a turn around. heehee. Great job.

I love Fack&Angell so much and this story really fits..
I was actually surprised when I heard they were dating (a happy surprise of course!) and I suppose this is what would happen after the whole IAB mess..
I loved that Danny was caught in between.. great story!

yay, my flangell fix! i think they're really good together and u wrote them well in this.

i also thought that what flack said after jess told him that IA knew that they were going out was a lil harsh too...i like what u said bout them

I loved it! :D It was really cute.

Great to see a new story from you :D I really enjoyed this, lots of great moments and character exploration. I liked how things progressed from hurt and anger between Flack and Angell to a resolution. It was good how you used Danny as well; roles have been reversed a little, as Flack has been caught previously between him and others, and now he finds himself the same. I liked how you wrote him here, making sure Angell was okay, and then his concern over the piece of metal.
Jess was great too, very much in character, and I was laughing at how cross she was with herself for tripping on her own feet - the trouble with wearing stilettos I guess! Great to read memories of her background and how she used to run, and how she felt her brothers would react. I loved the ending too, Flack rushing there, but Angell most certainly not a damsel in distress, and things working out okay between them. Really good!

yay! i like it :D i'm loving flack/angell though i wish they'd had more interaction in the episode. i like the way you had it work out with them. great story!