it was good

this is realy good and i cant wait for the next part if u make one :D

Yay! Your story is the first one I read after not going on this website for like... a month! HAHA.
You've got some minor grammatical mistakes. Or maybe it's just me. o_O

So just makes sure to reread and reread, like, fifteen times! Hahaha.
I thought it was funny when the doctor was like, "She needs you.
I would've been like, "Uh..." That sentence just feels so awkward. HAHAHAHA.
I'm sensing some friendship issues here. Ooh boy.

Anyways, keep going! You can do it!

yay u updated, to think i nearly forgot about the fic pl updated soon i rly want 2 kno what happens

Oh!

i'm Loving this story
please update somemore LOL

xo

your update made my day!you don't understand how long it's been since i've read something non-school related! aw the long awaited introduction...hopefully things will be steaming up in a few more chapters(wink) and don't sweat about updates you should go at a pace you feel suits you best. and YOU'RE the best for updating!

Aww, Roxas is so sweet. I love Roxette fan fictions and this one is really cute. Update soon!

AH.

I'm loving this story already! I love the descriptions and everything. Like, it still has that warm Twilight Town feeling but not really at the same time. Haha. If you get me.
Keep on writing!

oh WOW!

I love the storyline!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! XD

interesting, i wonder what happened to her...can't wait for the next update)