What an ending! I really liked where this story was going and you write pretty well to capture the mood and all the important details but that cant be the end? Just like that? Kind of abrupt! Still enjoyed it! Hope you write more!

A-Adachi/Naoto...That's...cute...-bricked
A combination of Naoto with older guy is very nice.

I like Adachi/Naoto.

And Doujima/Naoto(one-sided crush from Naoto. Hohohoh-kicked
Plus Yakushiji/Naoto is nice(Yakushiji is the assistant of Naoto's grandpa
Even NaotoxHer Grandpa will be n-WTF. FORGET IT.

But...NaoRise forever!