This is a great story. I find rorschach and his journals to be fascinating, and you've done an excellent job of capturing his essence in your writing. keep up the good work.

-kobez-

This is an awesome story! It's very well-written and in-character. Great stuff!

An interesting piece there, and one that really fits Rorshach. I like where your going with his friendship with Dan, it's done really well.

This story depresses the hell out of me. That's how I know you're doing a great job :)

Sick bastard, but not as sick as those he "takes care" of.

Awesome!
As to themes...well, I can't think of anything; but I'd certainly like to see more of Daniel, because you write him very well. :D
Keep up the good work!

Good work, this seems like it could have happened. I liked his interaction with Nightowl, seemed believable.

Absolutely love it. I think you've got Rorschach down.

This is great! you really put yourslf into the mind of Rorschach. I think the next one shoud be when the Comedian is killed. I would be honored if you'd allow me to post this story on deviantArt, (I'D GIVE FULL CREDIT TO YOU OF COURSE.) or if you let me make you some fanart! please tell me what you think. (my email won't recieve email from for some reason.) so you'd have to post the answer on deviant art or in your next chapter.

wow. just ... wow. this was pretty intense. very much in character. perfect style. and yet you never overdo it, don´t overplay the situations. just short and to the point glimpses. this is soemthing very accomplished you have here. hope you write more.

Rorschach avenging John Lennon's murder?
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

This was a good read and time well spent your story has given me hope of writing a Rorschach tale in the future. Thank you

I enjoy this story since it really sounds like what Rorschach would say. Great job.

Oh and I have a theme that might work.

Patriotism.

And so it begins... but what's with the three-year skip?

If they/you had wraped-it up with a very non-gay hug, that'd have been nice. :D No offense, though. Great writing, so far. I'm really enjoying this...

"What was name?"

He couldn't say "What was his name?"? I mean, I know he talks swiftly, briskly, quickly and all that stuf, but I don't know about quite that far...

Good job, though. Great writing.