Lol.
This crack pairing is... Hilarious.
Yet, nice. Ish.

Yeah.
I have a request.
A one-shot.
Pairing choices: ZackxCloud (because I love that pairing), Namixas (because that pairing could always use another one-shot), or CloudxYuffie (I see almost nothing about that one)
Prompt: "why are you staring at my eyes?" "well, your eyes are pretty. a nice shade of blue, they are."

I would really appreciate it if you did it!
You're a great writer (much better than me, at least), and, though I'd write a one-shot on my own, well... I'd fail at it...
Yes I am using that excuse and no, I'm not lying.

'Kay, thanks for reading this 8D

Interesting- Axel and Alice are great characters to pair up.

Your structure is good, as is your spelling. Grammar isn't perfect, but it's still good.

The biggest problem I can see is that is seems really rushed. Drawing out the sexual tension between Axel and Alice would have really done this story good.

Otherwise, not bad at all. Keep up the good work!

that was so cute! you should make this a complete story or a sequel or something! i want you to continue!

So I'm really hoping this isn't a one shot...-sighs- but if it is...AWESOME! Lovely pairing, and rare too, I like it!

O~! Pedo Axel =3= its so wrong but soo right! great crack pairing! Going to Faves!!

this is by far one of the most interesting cracks I have ever read
good job :)!