I just love this fic!

You just use all Tasuki's feelings and aspects and make a briliant fic. Your fic was too pretty cause I can imagine this after the fight, like a scene that Watase-sama forgot draw.
Ok, my englis is poor and ridiculous (if this word exists in english), so i just want to say this fic will go to my favorites.

nonna: My poor Tasuki!

nina: yehey! Tamahome kicked Tasuki's ass! but serously, i really liked it especially the fight scene when Tamahome knocked the hell out Tasuki...maybe, i'm being a bit mean but it's true...

nonna: My poor Tasuki...i can't believe anybody could be so mean to such a beautiful face...and a really good weapon to boot!

nina: well, i think his face is very-um...oh yeah, ANIMALISTIC! but i'm not saying it's an ugly face...well, my Tamahome beat HIM! and he doesnt need all that fancy thingamajig to beat him..just ordinary nunchucks and skill!

nonna: He doesn't need to beat my Tasuki with fancy weapons coz HE DOESN'T HAVE ANY! Tasuki's MAD FLIPPIN SKILLZ is THE BEST! A!

nina: then why was he knocked out? i mean, come on...Tamahome is the BEST! and the cutest too...and the...okay, the poorest...but he's got a cute brother...

nonna:Tamahome beat him coz that b* Miaka told him not to!

nina: well, that goes to show that he's stupid enough to follow that w*e...freakin b*h

nonna: f her!

nina: yeah!

I first realized something wasn't right when Miaka yelled "kick his ass", but I felt I was in a nightmare along with Tasuki when Chichiri said "kill that son of a bitch, no da". LOL

I love Tasuki. *snuggles* Thanks, it was nice to read a fic with him after quite a few years! _

I feel better after reading ur fic. Its true if stupid Miaka begged him not to fit, then Tasuki wold have WON! oh well, tamahome gettins tortured as payback in the ovas, for some reson I was laughing myself sick when they did that.

But i always think its funny when they beat up the character that beat up the one i like. at least Tasuki noes how to lose with grace, only on order though.)

its really funny and i hope u write more Tasuki!

do you just not like Tamahome or something? I am sure your right about Tauski's dreams of kicking his ass.

lolz

WHY DID I JUST NOW FIND OUT ABOUT THIS FIC! *fumes* Mou! .

You've inspired me to go out and watch Fushigi Yugi with this fic, and now I'm addicted. I decided to revisit this story since the fight scene between Tasuki and Tamahome, is so fresh in my mind. (I just saw it last night) It's so heartbreaking- I must say that I like your version of it better. Thanks so much for introducing me to Fushigi Yugi, Maren! Now I have another Anime to love!

You know, I read this story some time ago, but wasn't considerate enough to review it then. (Well, to be honest, I was new to , and didn't know HOW to review.) Back to the point a very, very good story! Funny in the beginning(Kick his ASS, Tasuki!) and at the end (In your dreams!), but somehow touched me in the middle, when Tasuki's being humiliated by Tamahome at breakfast. OK, so he wasn't being nice either but he had good reason! I loved the way that you got into Tasuki's head and made him into a real, feeling person you made him react to Tamahome the way a real person would. And I also like the fact that this fic is centered around a part of the series that I thought was very unfair Tasuki being "hobbled" while he's fighting for EVERYBODY'S life against kodoku-Tamahome. I mean, of course, he shouldn't have killed Tamahome but did that mean that he should have nearly been killed himself? And it's bad enough that Miaka was such a ditz in this scene did Yuu Watase have to make Chichiri a ditz too? Grrrrrrr. Enough of my rants! Excellent work! Please write more FY fics!

Woohoo!*laughing This was so funny! I love Chichiri's line"Kill that son of a bitch, no da!" Hehehehe. I hope you do write more FY fics! Have fun, ja ne! _

I SO totally agree with you! Seriously, if Miaka hadn't been such a ditz and just Tasuki do his job, then I'm positive Tamahome would be lying in some ditch somewhere... So amusing! There were hardly any errors, no, my bad. There were no errors that I could detect, I was laughing too hard to notice. (There's no bold on the paper! Huzzah!) Until later... keep writing! *grins*

I like it.

I coulda sworn, I wrote a kickin' review for this story... Hmm... I love it! I love Tasuki. He has untapped depths that are perfect for witing about. Good job!

Whoa! That was a cool ride! I'm not too familiar with Fushigi Yuugi but this fight scene may make me an instant Fushigi Yuugi fan! Love the scenario! Love the action! If you have more dreams like this, write them down and post 'em! *wink* I'd love to read more!