Just found this story today. Very interesting so far. Your explanatory notes were very helpful in understanding your timelines. Update soon.

i am so happy elizabeth is pregnant, thanks for the update i loved it

you know i wouldn't have expected them to wait this long into their marriage to kiss. i mean really wedding night ring a bell? a lot would have happened that night especially since the marriage is not considered official until it is consummated.

This is such a great story! You write the characters really well. I can't wait for an update!

yay for kitty growing up, but bo that she's going to see lydia. hopefully the bingley's stay and bring her back quickly.

minor grammar - when kitty says yes to the dance it's accepted, not excepted. :)

I liked their fist kiss very much! I agree that it would've been a private matter. My only question is the timeline. How long have they been married? Did her parents come to stay the same day they married or has it been a little while since? That part was a bit unclear. Other than that I enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing!

Loving it so far.. On to the next bit!

this chapter was wonderful, I like that kitty/catherine has grown up and has the affections of a good man...

I would love more lizzy/darcy interactions though (but then again I love them soo...haha)

please update soon!

So I'm kinda confused. Because I thought that these were going in chronological order, but that doesn't make sense if they have their first kiss in the second chapter, after they've already kissed in the first...

I do believe that they wouldn't have kissed in public, which, as you mentioned in your note at the beginning of chapter three, included their wedding ceremony. And that also reminds me, that you should know that we are nowhere near the 1800th century, and won't be for a while.

Otherwise, I really enjoy the one-shot stories. I'm excited to see what else you write about, and now you've even got me interested to learn all about 19th century weddings and societal norms, haha.

xo.

Aww! That was cute! Good for Elizabeth! I'm glad she made Wickham go away. He is such a weirdo. I never have liked him. And Mr. Drarcy only worried about Elizabeth and his sisters safety, and not even thinking about the fact that Wickham had been in his house! I just love him. Keep writing! :D
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i love seeing the married interaction, it's just so sweet.

THANK YOU!
I really love your story :)

Perhaps I missed this, but how long have they been married? I would assume they would have consummated the marriage on the wedding night and would have kissed at least then or perhaps in private beforehand. Interesting story and looking forward to the rest.

weird! It must have been another story i'm reading.. lol.. usually i forget the things in stories... not remember different ones!

anywho, i really liked this chapter as i love fluffy moments between lizzy and darcy..

please update soon!

wait... that was their first kiss?? but you had her mention that they have had intimacies throughout their month long honeymoon... and that implies more than kissing!? how could they be married for two months without kissing?!?

please update soon!