Love this story, u know it happens rarely but on the game, it has happened to me, after i defeated the horde I waited for like an hour or so when the church guy was coughing, i then opened it and it turned out to be a tank! and the worst part was that the campain was on expert oh well make more but change his infected style

You know the church guy never crossed my mind until now. Poor guy :<

I love the Crazy Church Dude. He always makes me smile. =D
This gave me a new insight on him. Nice story.
Although, how did he turn into a Smoker? Did he get bitten or something? Or maybe I just read too fast over that part. =)

I thought this was one of the better Left 4 Dead stories than what most people write. Really clever.

You should do a remake where he turns into a Tank. :P

Pretty good. I always hated that guy, but this story gave me a new sort of respect for Crazy Church Dude. Good job.

Funny thing is first time I played that campaign he turned into a Smoker... Now he keeps turning into a Boomer which annoys the hell out of me. But yeah I feel bad for the crazy church guy. D:

Oh, Crazy Church Guy is so cool... well, for a crazy guy. I always thought there should be some story behind why he was insane... y'know, other than an apocalypse. Oh, this was so heartfelt, and a true tribute to Crazy Church Guy! Retnuh ;D lol

This is an amazing story, and you're very talented. Please write more.

It was a good story...for your first time.

PS: I liked the church guy too. DING-DONG! DING-DONG!

Damn it's good. Your dark descriptions for the story were spot on. I'm making a similar one, based on epic fails. Thanks for some inspiration. Kudos, buddy!

Note: It doesn't sound or feel emo. Creepy/sad/hellish maybe. But emo? Nah.

Wow, that was quite good. Emotional, some good drama and an overall feel sorry feeling for that church guy. I always got Bill (my character) to say: "Son, we're immune, tired, and hungry now open that door!"

This was good. I'd like to see the same story but twisted for when he turns into the other infected.

Don is the name of the protagonist/antagonist in 28 Weeks Later :]
So it's kinda similar in that he was good then went bad...

This story's awesome

This is incredible, really.
You usually make funny stories to lighten the post-apocalyptic state, but when you go serious, you are just as good.
Fantastic, actually.
You should make another
But I just wanted to say, this story is great, but in the game, he says, "I can't believe he bit me, I can't believe I let him in," or something like that. So your story is different, but still just as good (:

Lol im so unimaginative, I always thought that the church dude was killed by the smoker, I never thought that he became it, I still dont know how though...o well...lol, awesome job :D