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cosmostar1
2009-04-07 . chapter 1
I love Fumiko! She is brill at embarrassing Kanda :) Are you going to do another one with her in? Poor Kanda, he's going to have to deal with Linalee, Lavi and Moyashi!
*Faves*
Mitsuki2185
2009-03-18 . chapter 1
Loved it! Kanda is my FAVORITE character. Lol. I like the part about hot girls with crickets going to meet the matchmaker and Yoruichi's (not sure if I spelled that right) shunpo! My favorite part is when you explained Kanda's habit of saying "Che". Priceless. Anyways, great story. I'd give it 5 stars!
Mei-chan
2009-01-25 . chapter 1
Oh silly me! For the longest time, I always thought 'aniki' meant 'big brother' since Sasuke always called Itachi that. Those silly subbers, giving me the wrong translation of 'aniki'.
Lt. Commander Richie
2009-01-24 . chapter 1
X3 made of far too much epic for me to really comprehend. Really.
Jackidy
2009-01-24 . chapter 1
Oh my dear god I got about three lines in and after that i wouldn't stop laughing even after i had finished. 100 points to kanda's sister lmao XD
xXDeath-N'-HellXx
2009-01-23 . chapter 1
hehehehe...that's funny. fumi seems like one hellava sister! well, great work! keep it up!

D-n-h
Anrai
2009-01-23 . chapter 1
Fumiko should totally be a canon character, for two reasons:
1) She fills the large void in my heart where Kanda's immediate family should be.
2) She makes Kanda embarrassed. And for me, nearly anything that results in Embarrassed!Kanda should be in the actual series, like, NOW.

In summary: LOVED IT. WRITE MORE FUMI KTHXBAI.
E.R.Burke
2009-01-23 . chapter 1
It was so perfect in every way! I LOVE it!Maybe you should expand past this oneshot, because all of these characters seem to well thought out, and I didn't get to know them as well as I wanted to. And you have a knack for torturing Kanda. You HAVE to love that. Keep it up!! ^-^
Ms.Lightfairyprincess
2009-01-23 . chapter 1
This is really funny!! XD

UPDATE SON!! I can't wait!
WrathofMugen
2009-01-23 . chapter 1
lol that was so funny! poor kanda!!
mimicsmaze
2009-01-23 . chapter 1
Oh gosh that was hilarious. *hugs self* Oh goshgoshgoshgosh!! XD
Man! Wouldn't want to be him! XD Pobre Kanda~! XD Dear god, I'm SO glad my sister's not like that. :O So so so so glad~! >.<
Anyways, this was awesome! As awesome and as funny as one can get. XD Fumi was a bit sketchy, true, but nothing a little polishing can't fix. ^-^
Keep it up~! d(^0^)b
-Maze ;P
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