   Your Silver Lining
2009-02-05 . chapter 1Dude that was more than hot or sexy. It was freaking HEXY! Normally, I refrain from reading lemons but since it was you I HAD to read it. I felt kinda bad L didn't say I love you back but I'm sure he means it. Right? Why would anyone call the cops on you? It's not like you did anything bad. Except, you know, have every fangirl drool to death. Anyway, I liked this. It was nice. You should write a plot or something. Byee!
~Silver |
 Breathless
2009-01-23 . chapter 1 :O
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... 'Ho crap, that was hot.
If anyone calls the cops on you, it's not going to be me. I've been a citizen of the internet long enough to become desensitized to Rule 34, and just go with the flow. I doubt anyone else would blow the whistle on you, either.
That was a very lovely PWP, as far as PWPs go. Personally, I prefer Pron-WITH-plot, but this was a lovely stand-alone scene, and it almost seemed as if there should have been some other stuff happening before and after, so it satisfied me after reading to contemplate what the story behind this might have been.
One last thing- and this is an entirely personal-opinion kind of thing- it bothered me a tiny bit when Light so easily said "I love you". Granted, people say some pretty uninhibited things when they, uuh, are physically involved, but I guess my interpretation of Light's character would be, he's not usually one to FEEL such things, let alone ADMIT ALOUD to feeling such things. Light's a complicated personality, and, in my interpretation, I think if he ever did fall in love with L that it would be an equally complicated feeling that 'love' wouldn't quite be able to define.
... But that's just me. :)
You're clearly a great writer, and I'm going to go check out the rest of your portfolio, now! |
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