Oh, I love it! Very nice. I've never heard the song, but I still liked your twist on it. A nice testament to sparky. : )

I hesitate between two words : awesome and mesmerizing !
It reminds me of my shakespeare lectures at Leeds university ! Great souvenirs...
I wish the poem was longer. It is really beautiful and magical.

In fact, you should write poems (maybe about an other ship, an anonymous one i mean) and publish them. You possess a great talent i wish i had too !