T__T Poor Gary! I think my heart just broke. *sniffle* That was very sweet. The voice was freaking amazing, as usual. Lovely!

SHQ ;]

You're very good at descriping things. Keep it up.

It is very sad that Gary had to die, but sometimes, someone has to leave this world. Everyone is going to do that some day. It is good that Lee survive and can be there for Kevin now, as it seems.

To this I would say... It is actually good as a one-shot, however, I'm sure it could be good if you continue, since you are very good at writing stories. The way you have written this and ended it, is the possible ending of a one-shot, but also that it can be continued. If you want to continue it, I say keep it up :)

Hostage... I remember reading it... But I didn't get to read the whole story, cause then I got busy and forgot it... I'd better go check it out soon again, I remember it as being really good :) I'm sure a sequel to Hostage would be really cool =)

Hi

Wow, this was intense.
I loved it even though it was really sad.
poor Gary, well he died an honoroble death saving Kev.

I'll subscribe incase theres more, I want that person brought to justice!


Can you tell me your idea?
I'd love to know, Hostage was a great but sad story.


Beywriter