"Well then, shall we, run for our lives?" he asked in a jokingly polite manner. "Oh yes, let's." Perfect quote from Lion King 1 1/2!

When you said paralyzed wood I think you mean petrafied wood!

Come on update

Hey man I read your story and it is great, why havn't you updated in over a year? Please update I want to see what happens next.

I just have this to say about the 'I Just Can't Wait To Be King' musical number: BIG-LIPPED ALLIGATOR MOMENT! Very well-written, I've enjoyed your work.

please update. I really like this story. For some reason I like stories from this movie when a human gets stuck in Africa. Again for Some strange reason. Anyway I hope you update soon. PLEASE?

I want four human girls in the story as they live at the pride and tried to protect themselves from the nasty hyenas.

5 out of 5!

AMAZING writeing skills dude.

When are you putting the next chapter in.

Love this so far, do keep going.

Aw how nice :) you describe the events very well and convey the emotion in the last bit very well too :)

Wow this is an awesome chapter keep up the great work.

Sorry for the late review. There was a lot of the movie in this chapter, but it was still done very well.

I really enjoy this story and i especially like how fast you put out each chapter. i go to school come home and their is another chapter ready to read awsome. i also like the spin on human injection into the lion king world. most stories like this only have one human, while yours has four each with their own personality that is very good and good job with the translations thats really cool. Good luck with the rest of the story keep it up

Wow great chapter aww poor Simba I feel sorry for him very good detailing you did a great job on this chapter keep it up can't wait for the next chapter.