 Shockwave88 2009-08-20 . chapter 5You gotta continue this, it's bloody awesome! XD |
 Lady Rhetorica 2009-02-14 . chapter 5Hah! A romp in world history through the study cards of Ron Stoppable. I particularly got a kick out of Drakkenstein and Lord By-Ron (groan). Fun read that captures the frenzied silliness of some of the KP cartoon episodes. |
 MeganKoumori 2009-02-06 . chapter 2Bide your time Ron, and you may just get to draw her naked...
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I did consider writing it in, but then I decided that would be taking things too far. Truth be told, I imagine Ron's version of the famous sketch would be a stick figure with boobs. |
 The Enduring Man-Child 2009-02-06 . chapter 5This was hilarious, especially the names! You're very talented. |
 Otter Seastar 2009-02-05 . chapter 5Hey, if you can do a movie parody for Frankenstein (there's no Igor in the book), you can do one for the Titanic. I'm sorry to see this story end so soon, but it was fun. Especially the Spleen of the Sea. |
 CajunBear73 2009-02-05 . chapter 5Yeah, right. |
 CajunBear73 2009-02-05 . chapter 4Bide your time Ron, and you may just get to draw her naked... |
 MeganKoumori 2009-02-05 . chapter 1‘Spleen of the Sea’? What next The Pancreas of the Great Lakes?
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(Snerk) You actually made me laugh. |
 screaming phoenix 2009-02-05 . chapter 5I bet Ron gets an A in the class now! |
 screaming phoenix 2009-02-05 . chapter 4Oh come on Kim let Ron draw you naked!
That was a well done parody of an overblown movie. The only part I liked was when Leo drowned. Well done! ‘Spleen of the Sea’? What next The Pancreas of the Great Lakes? |
 screaming phoenix 2009-01-30 . chapter 3Well that was short,sweet and brief but still with those odd bit's of humor that you carry through these things.
Ron calling Kim K.S.huh? I like it! |
 Otter Seastar 2009-01-30 . chapter 3Most excellent! The characters are well-depicted, and the "Cocoa Moo" bit in the last chapter was a hilarious touch. I hope to read more. |
 CajunBear73 2009-01-30 . chapter 3Well that was a pretty good Cliff's Notes account of one of Drakken's plots failing due to Kimmie and a little Ron factor at work (and play).
Just, in the next chapter, please don't leave Ron or Kim, or both, in that ice field... ok? |
 CajunBear73 2009-01-23 . chapter 2Oy, even waayy back then, they were true to form... |
 screaming phoenix 2009-01-23 . chapter 2I like it, it goofy beyond reason,but I like it. |