aww man this storys pretty awesome i love burst angel and yes the freakin endin could used some changing but wats done is done ;_; but there sure as hell better be a season 2. annyway this story was cool and heheh "goodbye jo my **" damn skippy that aint right this ending is pretty good ^^

I just finished watching Burst Angel, and when I saw this story, I just HAD to read it. And DAMN, this freaking cheered me up! I was SO sad! I mean Sei and Jo DIED! DIEEDD!! -sobs in corner again-

Somewhat surprised Jo would actually wear a dress, but I can picture her in one. LOL.
Aww, they're mariied! :3 Hehe. Yay!

Alright, I TOTALLY agree with you; 'Goodbye Jo' MY ** TOO! Omfg. I got SO sad/** when she just let go of 'em like that. -_- I would've freaking dug in the rummage until I found their bodies at least! Damn. THE ANIME HAD A LAME ENDING, GOSH. THEY SHOULD REPLACE IT WITH YOURS. -.- They're married! :3
Heheh, alright. That's enough of my endless, pointless ranting. Thanks for the great read! Totally brightened my mood after the lame ending. -.- LOL. Thanks. :D

it could of been better but you did a good job. would love it if you added a second chapter?

So much better then in anime!
Very good job!
ps. like you Meg a lot ;)

dude i totally agree that the original ending was totally lame. and i like how meg tricked sei's family into giving them millions.

I am one in you! I don't believe Jo died there too! That scarf should have been a giveaway!

Motto!

Cool job...i loved it.

You did an awesome job!