awh, thats cute!:)

this is a really great story... shane is hilarious! and he's pretty smart too! adorable story. keep up the great work!

Love it, completely and utterly. It was so cute and hilarious, I adore Shane's pick up lines! Well done.

This was really sweet, and I loved the pickup lines. There were a few typos, though, and the ending didn't really flow with the story. But those were the only things I didn't really like. The rest was pretty good. :)

Very very cute. i liked it

Aww I love it! Shane's hilarious (along w/ Caitlyn, of course :)

Awesome job!

aw! I loved it, you should totally make a sequel!

That was so sweet!

Shane and his pickup lines, just made me crack up!

Aw, it was cute. Shane with his lines was super adorable. He dosent give up does he? I think I just saw one spelling misatke, coarse for 'course' but other than that it was all fine. Great job for your first Shaitlyn .:)