Oh man! She disappeared!

This is an awesome story. Sorry I can't give you anymore arguments as to why you should continue. But if you get around to writing this again, I would be very happy.

Keep up the good work!

So great. I love your writing style, and the story is genuinely interesting. Not just another piece of fluff. Good job.
But you have to update it soon! This is too good a story for it just to be another unfinished story on this site.

OMG you totally got to update this!)

Why is this story so addicting to read? Plz update.

This story is absolutely amazing, I can't wait for the update. :3

The writing style blew me away.

I already love Riku's character at the beginning and can't wait to read what else the rest of the chapters hold.
The pairing pulled me in and certainly the title had as well, very good work.

I do so love your writing style. This is such a great story, and a very creative interpretation of Riku. I hope we won't have to wait as long for the next update, but hey, I understand how it happens. Keep up the great work!

This is really good! Can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder what happened to Twilight Town. . .

Thank you for a great update! :D Really interesting build up here, definitely excited for what's to come. The way you write dialogue makes it seem really genuine. Great work again

Finally Good chapter though, update faster next time xD Great work :3

Great story! The plot is really cool and you made the characters more interesting. ;D Can't wait to read what happens next.

I gotta say, I REALLY love this story. I always thought this pairing was unlikely but you made it work out so far. Great job, can't wait for the update!

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Yeah! Plot Twists! *Happiness
xD Stupid Riku, Stop being a bum and help the damn girl!

Love what you've done so far with the story _

Noree-Chan

I'm really starting to get into this story. It seems to be paced nicely. I have to say again, great descriptive language. The dialogue feels very natural, good job. Your characterization of Riku is delectable. "You’re barking up the wrong damn tree, ‘cause I don’t save worlds.” Just fabulous. Your interpretation of Riku is something I agree with heartily.

Aww...That was really awesome _

Srry it took so long for me too review xD

I was caught up some stuff, but great job

I still love the fact that Riku's a nicotine addict,

and I don't know why, but it completely fits the way
I see Riku after the whole adventure, all depressed like

xD

But don't worry Riku! Olette will be there to save YOU!*Hands Cookies
Here ya go! Some freshly baked Virtual Cookies _

Noree-Chan