actually, that was really good. i was shocked at the ending and thought there was going to be nitchie, but that was seriously really, really, really, really good.

THAT DID NOT SUCK. D
That was awesome. I LOVED the style of writing. It was different. I really like different. xD

So, I noticed Nate called Mitchie, "Michelle". Of course... I making a big deal out of since, well, Michelle is my name. xD. So, Mitchie is a nickname for Michelle, eh? Interesting. I wouldn't use it. I prefer Chelle. Or Chellie. Or Chellez. xD.

Her baby's name, CUTE. Demetria Devonne. Loved that you used Demi's name. xD.

Your writing is amazing. Great job.:

That was good; I liked it.
Angelica

I thought that that was amazing. I loved how you put the words in different forms like bold and how you centered the important things. I thought that this was well done and did not suck.

Great story! I didn't think it sucked at all. Your writing is really unique and I enjoyed this piece very much! Amazing job!

you bloody lier! that didnt suck! I loved it! XD I thought it was really good! XD I loved how the words like repeated over and over like her thoughts! XD I thought it was really good dont be so hard on yourself XD

KT

that was great. u can't be too harsh on yourself.

i liked.

Holy...you speak spanish? Ha, I'm shocked :D I personally love that song as well Anyways; this did not suck, it was really good actually :P I loved that Nate was there with Mitchie through it all, but personally, if I was Shane I'd be a little jealous, lol.
I have a question.

Would you ever consider writing Nalex one shots/stories by any chance? Or is that not a pairing you really like? :D

I think I kind of like this writing style. And I like the story itself. I love that she made him leave and went so long with out him. Because he cheated and that's wrong. And it's not something to be taken lightly. And I love that Nate stepped in to help. That was awesome. Overall, amazing fic. Great job!

this was really good. im sure that youre actually proud of it yourself but you just think that it wasnt. but it was amazing. i love your writing by the way. and your name. haha.

Phew, that was great. The only thing that bothered me was the happy ending. Poor Natey.

I love that you're trying out new writing styles! I definitely like this new one. It's amazing
I'll admit that the ending wasn't AMAZING, but nothing to be upset with. Shane is just my favorite character in the universe. Even when he cheated on Mitchie. Brilliant characterization of him, by the way. Mitchie was a little OOC, but the story was right for it.

Anyway, good job!
Love,

Caitlin

I liked the happy ending. And this wasn't bad. Sure, you've had better, but you're in a slump. It happens to all of us. This definitely isn't your worst)

That didn't suck at all! That was awesome. I realy liked that style you used. GREAT job!

that. did. not. suck. no way did that suck! i love the way you wrote it with emphasis and all it was awesome! perfect! love it!