Interesting. I do think your portraying Anakin a tad too "hard". The stress of months of combat without a break could explain the subtle changes... in that case, its the admiral or Obi-wan that comes across as naive. It could be either... or both.

Based on that interactions with Luke upon finding him tho, Anakin is more forceful that normal. I think it would be OOC if your overplayed that aggressiveness.

Also, based on the material from the movies, Obi-was is the pragmatic one... Anakin is the guy who would go and deviate from the plan to try and save one clone pilot.

Gah. Bloody cliffhangers. Much liked. The confusion is a lot of fun to read. All the others I've read agree with each other so quickly, here, confusion reigns. Keep writing!

I love this idea! You did a nice job keeping everyone in character so far.
"Error. No such term as “Jedi” -> gave me chills. That's even worse than the Empire writing a whole bunch of lies. Freaky.
I've added this to my favorites, and I really hope you update again someday!

PLEASE UPDATE THIS. i beg of you :( I have been searching for months and months for a good Star Wars fic (if you've noticed, there arent many recently updated) and i was so happy to find this one.

don't abandon it...please :(

Damn, this fic is /good/! Please don't abandon- I'd hate to see a fic with such potential go to waste =D

Please update...
PLESE!

this rocks
You should have Anikin Skywalker meet Lord Vader.
:D

dang. this ROCKS!


please update soon--you've got two cliff hangers going at the same time!

Not one cliffhanger, TWO of them! You're that cruel!
No, seriously, I sympathize. Just, PLEASE go on with your story (as soon as you get over your depression).

I suspect Piett - but even female intuition can be mistaken... And on the other hand the traitor obviously is able to use force choke... No idea. This applies to the mysterious person who wants to shoot Anakin and Luke (or actually just one of them), too.

This story is just fantastic! I nearly died laughing! Luke and Anakin are talking that lovely at cross-purposes. Luke and Roenai...no comment. And the best, of course, in the end: "I'm dead." *lol* Oh no, the very best is: "He was my father" and Anakin fainting.
I'd never thought Yularen thinking quicker than Obi-Wan... I have to change my mind about him. All the same he stays a (his)-ship-loving weirdo. ("A traitor? On MY ship?")

WOW!! AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!

Wow...wow! This is just great. I love how you had me on the edge of my seat throughout the entires tory. That's just awesome. I absolutely love this and please update soon!

Wow, this is an awesome story. I'm a sucker for time travel fics, and I love how Luke and Anakin are reacting to each other. :-)

Nice to 'see' you again!

Aayla's part was really well-paced-- I could almost see it as animated like the TV show.

"“We find you in the middle of a coma in the desert, drag you here, you wake up and you seem to think you’re some sort of Jedi! Get real! There are no Jedi! They’re dead -- and I know they’re dead because I’m the last one!”" Oh Luke, whining again.

"Cut it off myself, did I?" Owch.

The juxtaposition of the floating datapad with "impossible" was lovely.

Hoo boy, mysterious Force-choking. Not the cliffhangers, woman!

Nice.

VERY VERY VERY VERY GOOD.
Please more more more again again again update soon soon soon.