The first two chapters were really good! It's nice to see Lucy having a bit of a romance for once; we don't really see many of romances for her, at least not during the Golden Age! Anyway, Matheyu seems like a nice guy, and believeable character. Update soon! I can't wait to see where you are going with this! =)

This looks really good so far! I can't wait to see where you take it! ;D

*does a happy dance* You updated! I was too lazy to review the first chapter because I thought you had given up on this. Silly me.

Anyway, I love this story! Most people overlook Lucy's capacity for romance, and this is starting off very well. Can't wait for more!

Two updates in one day on two different stories?! lol What is going on here?

I love the Cat's cryptic little message...which, of course, we should all recognize. :) Looking forward to more...

I didn't realize you had written another story until I was reading over your profile again today. This story has a good tone and style. Lucy is rarely paired with anyone so this offers a fresh, new twist to things! I hope you continue this story. Good job on the opening: Matheyu looks to be a interesting OC so far.

How did I not notice you posted something new?

This is already so different in tone and style from "The Gypsy's Daughter" and I absolutely LOVE it. You don't see many male OC's paired with Lucy and it's really refreshing. I hope you continue!

Very interesting start, Lucy is very open minded and accepts everyone. The poor guy seemed mortified and embarrassed. I like the way you describe the whaler. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Well done!

Very true to character and it's so nice to see a male OC for once! You've done a nice job with him too - I really enjoyed this chapter and look forward to more!

-jb

Great story! I look forward to reading more. My favorite part was the dwarf offering to shoot Matheyu.